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fragmentary poem about a scary man and a young boy who is slowly persuaded by a group of children to go into the man's garden to find a hidden chest. View table of contents...
Submitted: Apr 11, 2008 Reads: 45 Comments: 4 Likes: 2
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excellent poem! I have no words! ;-)
keep writing! ;-)
Posted: Apr 21, 2008
"the iron cries a lonely sigh" i love that line! actually, i love the whole poem. good job! =)
Posted: Apr 21, 2008
wow, excellent job..!! i especially loved the third stanza.. amazingly written poem!! =)
Posted: Apr 28, 2008
Wonderful poem I love the darkness and the twisted nature......
Love dark tales and gothic horror
Peace
Boneman
Posted: Apr 28, 2008
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