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Fragment Bogey

Poem By: Ama
Poetry


fragmentary poem about a scary man and a young boy who is slowly persuaded by a group of children to go into the man's garden to find a hidden chest. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Apr 11, 2008    Reads: 45    Comments: 4    Likes: 2   


There’s the house, the fence is high
The iron cries a lonely sigh
A silent monster dwells inside
The traffic signs warn ‘run and hide!’
 
The streets are dirty, aren’t they?
He never swept them, so they say…
His hands are reaching for your head
Maybe tomorrow you’ll be dead!
 
See the glass on the roof, you do?
That rotting pigeon gives a clue…
A blinding moment when he strikes
The scream of children most he likes!
 
Alone you go, you mustn’t fear
The garden waits, we watch you, dear…
Your tongue twists once you pass the gate
The Prince is barking, don’t be late!
 
It happens when the full moon shines
He’s walking out to the trees and vines
And digging deep to Gaia’s breast
And placing there that tiny chest             
                                                          
This is real, not a fairy tale
Not sung to them girls, not for sale
He bears the branches’ cold embrace
The dark’s rich secrets veil his face
 
That chest you bring, such brave, young boy
(For cunning beasts an easy toy…)
When Earth slumbers its soft, dry dream
A dreadful landscape it might seem!
 
His witchcraft’s weak to spell-bind us
He boils his cauldron, makes that fuss
You heard those stories true and old
An attic’s madman he was called!


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Comments:

excellent poem! I have no words! ;-)
keep writing! ;-)

Posted: Apr 21, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you. it truly means a lot to me. I haven't written anything recently, but I think I will give it a try soon. I already have a couple of lines in my head. :0)

"the iron cries a lonely sigh" i love that line! actually, i love the whole poem. good job! =)

Posted: Apr 21, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks. it's good to read such comments. :-) - Ama

wow, excellent job..!! i especially loved the third stanza.. amazingly written poem!! =)

Posted: Apr 28, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm happy that you liked it. :o) This poem has become one of my favourites. I even re-wrote the first stanza a couple of days ago to make it better, because I did not really like the last two lines. Probably I'll edit this old version soon.
-Ama-

Wonderful poem I love the darkness and the twisted nature......

Love dark tales and gothic horror

Peace

Boneman

Posted: Apr 28, 2008

Author Comment:

darkness is my obsession too. thanks for the kind comment. :)



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