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Submitted: Feb 23, 2008 Reads: 46 Comments: 4 Likes: 2
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Has a nice flow to it
Posted: Feb 23, 2008
Wonderful! I could actaully feel the true sting of your poem!..I invite you to my profile sometime. ^^
Posted: Feb 23, 2008
Wow! How'd you come up with this poem? Your writing is very professional. I noticed that none of the rhymes were forced-- and the words you used were breath-taking:).
Awesome work!!
-Ghiradelli Girl
Posted: Feb 28, 2008
I thought this was really different, beautifully expressed - quite lovely. My favourite line - "Remember oceons wide and wild" - I love the sea, that sent a shiver down my spine.
Posted: Feb 28, 2008
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