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Submitted: Feb 23, 2008    Reads: 46    Comments: 4    Likes: 2   


A dream of spell is poisoned deep
A diamond prince one night to meet
That scream of elder trees of snow
So strange a vision once I saw
 
Blow wind, and clear the skies above
Your apples rolled along a love
The bluest words one ever wrote
Some slaughtered birds, a sinking boat
 
A black cat’s death is coming near
A future far, my whitest fear
That dome of divine plastic bats
Skulls and tombs and bleeding rats
 
Remember oceans wide and wild
Faces close so gentle and mild
Light purple eyes stroking my hair
Sweet blossom forever be fair


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Comments:

Has a nice flow to it

Posted: Feb 23, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm happy that you like it. ;-)

Wonderful! I could actaully feel the true sting of your poem!..I invite you to my profile sometime. ^^

Posted: Feb 23, 2008

Author Comment:

thanks. I will check out your works.

Wow! How'd you come up with this poem? Your writing is very professional. I noticed that none of the rhymes were forced-- and the words you used were breath-taking:).

Awesome work!!

-Ghiradelli Girl

Posted: Feb 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks for your comment. :-) Some parts of the poem were based on a dream I had years ago. I started to write down my memories, pictures I remembered, and my imagination began to work. I think that is how all this was born.

I thought this was really different, beautifully expressed - quite lovely. My favourite line - "Remember oceons wide and wild" - I love the sea, that sent a shiver down my spine.

Posted: Feb 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you. I too love the sea, although I have seen it only two or three times in my life. (Of course I have seen it in movies a lot, but that's not quite the same) It gives me much inspiration, especially if I think of the waves and the way they move.



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