This is what I call a 7-6-5 poem. The first line has 7 syllables, the second line has 6, and the third has 5. It's a bit reminiscent of a haiku, of sorts. View table of contents...

Submitted: Feb 6, 2008    Reads: 34    Comments: 2    Likes: 2   

Sunshine Smiles

Sunshine always in his eye

Sparkles everlasting

For smiles to come

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Lacey Cummings

Amanda - this is very nice! It makes you want to smile when you read it. Excellent job!

Posted: Feb 7, 2008

Author Comment:

It was intended 100% to make the reader smile! Glad it did so for you! =D

Dragonfly

Good Job! This is very upbeat and it makes you happy.

Posted: Feb 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Thankies! :D

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