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Wretched Lonely Siren

Poem By: Amans Verba
Poetry


*EDIT - I removed what was previously the last stanza. I think it sounds better without it; a little more eerie and open-ended.*

This is one of my "emo" poems, written when I was in a depressed mood and thinking about classical mythology. The sirens were these women who sat on a rock in the middle of the ocean and sang magic songs that lured unsuspecting sailors to come so close to the rocks that they would destroy their ships and die. This poem takes a sympathetic view of one such siren. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 26, 2008    Reads: 36    Comments: 1    Likes: 1   


Oh wretched lonely siren,
Trapped upon your isle,
Guarded by harsh rock,
Held by fate so vile.

How your voice does sound!
And how you sing again!
How your heart does break,
Watching drowning men!

You'll ne'er feel his hand,
Nor taste his sweet hot breath,
For you are ever destined,
To lead him to his death.

Alure him with your voice.
Keep him with your grin.
Reach to him your hand-
Your time is running thin!

Alas! These rocks and wretched fate!
Your lover cannot last.
His boat has hit and run aground,
And he is dying fast.

Oh blissful doom and shapely death!
What a way for him to go!
At least his dying sight was sweet,
At least, your song, he'll know.


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Comments:

I especially like the 2nd last stanza.
This captured the essence of the sirens.
Great writing.

Posted: Aug 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you. ^_^



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