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Dragon Bane

Poem By: Amity Willows
Poetry


Dedicated to my alter ego, Dragon Bane. She was born on booksie just a few days ago and now roams free among you writing. You may see her comments occasionally. Do not be a afraid. She may not be a registered user, but she is the alter ego of a registered user. She will do you no harm. Please enjoy my first poem about her. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Dec 29, 2007    Reads: 48    Comments: 2    Likes: 2   


Dragon Bane surveys the terrain,
Her long black hair blowing in the wind,
Dragon Bane feels no pain,
As ancient runes are tattooed on her skin.

Dragon Bane strides into battle,
Screaming her battle cry,
Herding the enemy like cattle,
She summons lightening from the sky.

Dragon Bane counts the slain,
Yet no burial is held for them,
Dragon Bane feels no shame,
No remorse, not anything.

Dragon Bane fights like a beast,
Striding through the battleground,
Wild fury untamed and unleashed,
She will not stop till victory is found.

Dragon Bane summons rain,
Cold rain that seeps through bones,
Dragon Bane has much to gain,
But so much to lose.

Dragon Bane fights memories,
Lost images for years suppressed,
Just as she fights living enemies,
She also fights her past.

Dragon Bane will win again,
Another fortress in her grasp,
Dragon Bane will maintain,
Her iron rule over the land.

Dragon Bane feels no joy,
As her enemies fall once more,
She feels not so sly and coy,
As her soldiers think of her.
 
Dragon Bane will abstain,
From celebrating victory,
Dragon Bane feels no pain,
Only emotions so contradictory.

 

(Copyright (©) 2007. All rights reserved)


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Comments:

Lionheart
(not registered user)

I loved the last line :D
This is a good idea for a fantay novel...
I think i was the first to feel her presence right?

By the way, i hate your page.... i really really hate it.... it wont let me comment at all. Its been like that for ages for me so i havent been able to reply to anything you say.... GGRERRROOAARARRR!!!!
P.s. I have a new piece i think you'll like :)

Posted: Jan 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much! And you think so? I am going to write more about her....but a novel? Hmmm...I have an idea. Uh oh, you better run! No...it's a safe idea.

And yes. I wanted to do something inexplicable, so I signed out of my account to comment on one of your poems. The character just popped into my head. One could say that you inspired her blood lust. (Oh monkey...how you fling poop in my eye)

HOW DARE YOU! I worked hard on that page. GRRRRRR. Complain to booksie guy about it! Pester him!! Trust me, it doesn't work. :D

AND I LOVE YOUR POEM ABOUT........UM......I LOVE YOUR NEW POEM!

(I wasn't about to say that I love your poem about nudity. People might think I'm scary. Oops.)

Ienne
(not registered user)

Wow! That was amazing! It really was! Wow! You should write more about Dragon Bane. She's really cool! =D I loved this! Could you add a 'LIKED IT' for me, booksie doesn't let unregistered users do it.

Posted: Mar 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much!!! And yeeeees, I'll write more about her. I'm sorry I haven't been writing much lately, a lot has been going on lately. And sure! Thank you again. :)



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