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I Dipped My Quill Into The Blackest Of Inks

Poem By: Amity Willows
Poetry


A writer attempts to write from his heart but instead writes from his soul, "The blackest of inks". It's about Edgar Allen Poe. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Nov 4, 2007    Reads: 106    Comments: 9    Likes: 6   


I dipped my quill into the blackest of inks,
But when the quill touched the paper,
The words were as red as blood and redder,
And my scream of terror was never heard.

I dipped my quill into the blackest of inks,
The ink was black as midnight and blacker,
But when the words found the paper,
They were red as the setting sun.

I threw my quill away forever,
But the quill returned again,
I vowed never to write anymore,
I swore to God then broke my vow.

The quill taunted me, telling lies,
Even now it taunts me still,
So I write when it tells me to,
Blood still flows from the quill.

Do not venture into the hidden room,
The dark place where the book is,
That first book the quill wrote,
The quill used my hand and wrote with it.

Do not, do not seek the book,
The book of evil and of shadows,
Do not read the book of evil,
Do not read the book of blood.

I dipped my quill into the of blackest inks,
I dipped my quill into a pit of despair,
I dipped my quill into a shadowy divide,
I dipped my quill into my soul.



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Comments:

Amity Willows:

Most effectively well written. Has every possible feature for a truly great poem. Liked this one. A lot. One of the best I have ever seen posted on Booksie. Great job.

Happy trails,

Ed Bradley.

Posted: Nov 5, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks you so much, I'm so glad you liked it!

Strong writing! very Good!

Posted: Nov 5, 2007

Author Comment:

Aww shucks. :-)

Beautifully written. The way you've crafted it compels the reader forward, leaves him breathless for that last tragic line.

Posted: Nov 5, 2007

Author Comment:

I'm so glad you like it! :-)

Very good work! I enjoyed it and Poe is one of my favorites. I wish you well and God Bless. Lisa

Posted: Nov 5, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks so much! Best wishes, :-)

This again, is very good writing! Almost makes me wonder if a writer is that of an obsessive ~ nixie

Posted: Nov 11, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks you so much for your feedback! :-)

Its great and if you really are 13 you have a very bright literary mind.

Posted: Nov 20, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you! And yes I'm thirteen, though I'll be fourteen relatively soon. :) Thank you again!!

I LOVE this poem. For me it reflects the addiction of writing...the vowing to give it all up when it's too frustrating or when one's writing is just not good enough...but then the pen (quill) becomes again and the love affair continues. Certainly an amazing poem for a thirteen year old. Annie

Posted: Nov 24, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you so much!!!

James Gagiikwe
(not registered user)

Approriate linkage with Poe. Carries the mood well.

Posted: Dec 8, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks. :)

Lionheart
(not registered user)

YOUR BEST PIECE!

ONE OF THE BEST PIECES ON BOOKSIE!

You blew my mind with this! I cant say more because i cant top off how big i think this is, also my vocabulary could do with some work. Beautifully written with an entire story told. So Poe... black...
I think my ink would be cloud grey...
What do you think yours would be?

Posted: Jan 1, 2008

Author Comment:

THANK YOU SO MUCH!!!!!! I'm so glad you like it enough to deafen me!! (Capital X, capital D)

XD

Again, thanks!! And my ink would be:

Yesterday: A hyper bright green
Today: A mellow and deep blue
Tomorrow: God only knows

My moods change faster then the weather. (And I don't mean the weather where I live. It only has two settings. HOT and chilly.)



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