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Star Dreamers

Poem By: Amity Willows
Poetry


A poem about dreamers. Enjoy. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Oct 29, 2007    Reads: 80    Comments: 12    Likes: 6   


All we want,
Is a way out of here,
All we need,
Is a heart without fear,
All we hope for,
Is a home without pain
All we wish for,
Is to dream again.

Star Dreamers always look ahead,
And believe in those words foresaid,
Our only goal is to help and to heal,
Inner goodness we do reveal.

All we want,
Is for this war to end,
All we need,
Is someone to befriend,
All we ask for,
Is for some to survive,
All we wish for,
Is to stay alive.

Star Dreamers never fall behind,
It is our duty to free those confined,
We are the ones who fight without bloodshed,
We are the ones who remember the dead.

(Copyright (©) 2007. All rights reserved)


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Comments:

This was beautiful. It's exactly the thoughts that run through my head every day. A wonderful right! =) mandy

Posted: Oct 29, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you!

you are very talented for such a young person keep up the good work

Posted: Oct 30, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you very much! :)

A Lovely poem, so much insight for your years, Keep it up.
Nat

Posted: Oct 31, 2007

Author Comment:

I'm glad you like it, and thanks! :)

lost 4 words...

Posted: Nov 2, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks. :)

wonderful! a most enjoyable read.

Posted: Nov 2, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you so much!

this is wonderful

this parragraph really got to me

******

All we want,
Is for this war to end,
All we need,
Is someone to befriend,
All we ask for,
Is for some to survive,
All we wish for,
Is to stay alive.

******


its good to see there are people out there

who want us all to be friends, have hope, stop war!

since you ranked my poems ill rank yours

10/10 - good job!

Posted: Nov 2, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you so very much! I'm glad you like it!!

(And yes I am a definite believer in peace, hope and friendship)

:-)

Your poem is great! It is so true and real.
-Alena

Posted: Nov 11, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you so much! :)

Lionheart
(not registered user)

Moving......
I guess one of this worlds greatest problems is that we torture the next generation with "mistakes". But i can see your enduring it. Keep that state of mind, it will save you one day.
Great poem, Yvonne highlighted my favourite stanza aswell.

Posted: Nov 13, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you so much for your feedback! I'm glad you like it! :-)

Beautiful, and very true. Great message- I love this poem.

Posted: Nov 15, 2007

Author Comment:

Aww shucks! *Blushes and giggles*

Ienne
(not registered user)

Wow! That's really awesome!

Posted: Nov 17, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you so much! I'm so glad you like it! :)

it makes me believe on reaching m dreams more,wherever i fall...this poems reminds me to be strong...

i am a dreamer

Posted: Dec 14, 2007

Author Comment:

Thank you so much!! I'm so glad my poem is that strong. :D

I love it! It's so real and everything. Great job!

Posted: Jul 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much!! =)



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