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Submitted: Jan 14, 2008 Reads: 99 Comments: 16 Likes: 7
Piggies in a bucket,
Struggling to break free,
Squirming, grunting wriggling,
Oh dear, oh my, oh me!
Four little piggies,
Not yet fattened up,
Stuck in a bucket,
Running out of luck.
Will you help the piggies?
The poor little things,
Will you help the little darlings,
Will you give them wings?
God help the piggies,
Whose buttocks are quite stuck,
In that damn devils bucket,
Of ill fortune and bad luck.
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What a cute picture and poem! Very amusing and fun! I love it!
MA
Posted: Jan 14, 2008
Lol!! Loved it!! =D
Posted: Jan 14, 2008
i like it what i got from the poem is how the pig would feel. thats a good sign when a poem has some meaning beside what your reading good job
Posted: Jan 14, 2008
You poem is soo goood....I loved it
It's sooo cute!!!!Lei :B
Posted: Jan 15, 2008
i'm so sorry! that was my little bro tiping up bad stuff
Posted: Jan 15, 2008
im sorry! that was my little bro TYPING up bad stuff
Posted: Jan 15, 2008
VERY FUNNY
Posted: Jan 15, 2008
Well done Amity...an amusing piece.
Posted: Jan 15, 2008
Good poem; something I think William Blake may have written if felt the need. You have and well done.
Posted: Jan 15, 2008
lol lol lol lol heheheheeh!!!!
you did it good Amity!!!!!!!!
How Cute, Adorable and so funny (BIG SMILES)!!!!!!!!!
Posted: Jan 15, 2008
Really great.... whitty and funny loved it......have a great day Juliet
Posted: Jan 15, 2008
Funny stuff and gives me a whole new appreciation for all piggies in general. LOL!
Posted: Jan 16, 2008
i loved it! lol
Posted: Jan 16, 2008
[lionheart draws his sword] Go back to where you spawned from demon bucket!!! [lionheart clashes with the bucket in an epic battle.... but loses and goes into the fetal position. He begins mumbling; "...so strong... how does it know?....."]
Yes its true.... i tried to overcome it and it broke me mentally sending me into a worrying laugh. It was sooo cute!!!! I loved it, and it was structured well and all!! Just fantabulous!!
[lionheart sighs and puts his sword away, the fate of the piggies are not in his hands...]
Posted: Jan 24, 2008
yes of course ask first! if its disapproved its ok i respect your mothers decision. By the way, your a great kid asking your parents!!
Oh delete this comment.
Posted: Jan 24, 2008
i liked it. it was amusing.
Posted: Feb 2, 2008
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