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The Spirits Song

Poem By: Amity Willows
Poetry


This poem is actually called hope, but the title was sadly taken. I was then going to call it perseverance, but that was taken as well. Oh well, this name works too! Please enjoy! :D View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Dec 25, 2007    Reads: 53    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   


Frost lies on the blackened ground,
Whispers float in the air,
The spirits are all gathered around,
Their presence is everywhere.
Single green shoot in a deadened forest,
Fights for its right to live anew,
The spirits sing their songs around it,
The words they speak are words so true.
“Even in the dead of night,
After all are laid to rest,
Even without the bright moon’s light,
After all have left,
Even then, when hope is gone,
Can there be a sign of life,
After all is over and done,
There can be a sign of Right.”
The spirit’s song of hope rings true,
For green is the color of hope,
And green is that one lonely shoot,
That through winter and ash can cope.

 

 

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Ienne
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I really liked it! And I think that the name is good! :)

Posted: Dec 26, 2007

Author Comment:

Thanks! I'm glad you like it. It just came to me, like roller blading bunnies from mars. (Don't ask, though you probably will)

Excellent piece. I am in awe of your genuine brilliance. Age has nothing to do with it and yet it does! How can somebody so young have such insight?

Posted: Jan 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much!!!!! You're so nice!!! :D



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