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The Night Clock

Poem By: Amorelle
Poetry


Not my best poem ever, though. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Oct 10, 2008    Reads: 44    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   


The stars seem to wink back at you

Telling you to believe

There are fairies and ghosts

But tonight there is only peace

 

Birds flutter by

The trees seem to be whispering to one another

And brushing their leaves

Leaving traces of love and kindness

 

As day dawns

One can bright shades of pink, orange, read, and blue.

As if someone painted on it like canvas

And the world has become a scenic beauty

 

And then night comes around again

And the nightingale sings like a harp

And the trees brush past each other

While the stars blink back at us.

 

Children around the world are asleep.

They shut their eyes and imagine.

Resting peacefully, they do not suspect

the events of the New Day.

The stars seem to wink back at you

Telling you to believe

There are fairies and ghosts

But tonight there is only peace

 

Birds flutter by

The trees seem to be whispering to one another

And brushing their leaves

Leaving traces of love and kindness

 

As day dawns

One can bright shades of pink, orange, read, and blue.

As if someone painted on it like canvas

And the world has become a scenic beauty

 

And then night comes around again

And the nightingale sings like a harp

And the trees brush past each other

While the stars blink back at us.

 

Children around the world are asleep.

They shut their eyes and imagine.

Resting peacefully, they do not suspect

the events of the New Day.

 


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Comments:

Sweet , dulcet and kindly ; a sort of exhortation of the euphoria poets sometimes get in moments of serene solitude;
Saints were familiar with the same extacy
The trees whispering to one another - a good line = too good to repeat it again later.
Only a suggestion.
Feel free to do the same to mine .

Posted: Oct 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Actually it was not supposed to be repeated. My computer is really old, so it sort of mixed up my poem and duplicated it. I'll edit it right now :)

A sort of masterpiece

Posted: Nov 24, 2008

Author Comment:

LOL, but my stupid computer repeated it, so sorry so much. I don't know how to fix it! I tried to......hmmmm.......



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