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heart vs. mind

Poem By: amydikum
Poetry


I wrote this about one of my boyfriend's friends. He is dating this girl that doesn't want to open up to him emotionally or physically because of a previous relationship. In her previous relationship the guy brainwashed her into thinking that she only loved him if they had sex. Now, because of this situation, she feels that this guy, her current boyfriend, is just like him. Hence "I'm getting his second chance, when he had the first." View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 6, 2008    Reads: 32    Comments: 1    Likes: 1   


how can i touch your heart,
if i can't hold your hand?
how can there be music, on a stage with no band?
you are unsure of my intentions.
i am unsure of your trust.
i have some expectations,
but you write them off as lust.
i have put in the time,
for someone else's crime.
i'm getting his second chance,
when he had the first.
you push me away
as if i have been cursed.

i set aside feelings,
to make you feel secure.
i bait the hook,
but i don't use the lure.
despite my frustration
i will wait.
i will make you understand
so that you can relate.

don't be afraid of my touch,
let go of the clutch.
come closer and closer until we are one.
i am the hero baby,
not the one with the gun.

i will protect you and not pressure you at all.
i can't promise to catch you,
but i can cushion your fall.

if there is ever a worry
in your pretty little mind
just look in your heart and you will find
that i will always answer when you call
and i will tell you
that our love is one of a kind.


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Comments:

hi! amy. u've done a marvellous job in portraying the feelings of the boy. but i can sympathise with the girl. once bitten, twice shy. i do hope she does open up to such a nice guy. this is an excellent excellent poem. keep it up. lol. ;-)

Posted: Aug 17, 2008



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