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you keep the pieces of my life

Poem By: an0nym0us
Poetry


i dedicated this to a friend -a bestfiend-
we write letters to each other for fun...
telling each other out daily life
..im too scared to call her
incase i say everything and left nothing to write
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Submitted: Jun 24, 2008    Reads: 117    Comments: 5    Likes: 4   


you keep the pieces of my life

Everyone thought we were cling together
Thinking we were there forever
Each day of our life was shared
It was all fun and game, we never cared

Cared about tomorrow

We were so shallow

Thinking we could have each other for eternity
A dream lost in our honestly
.
Some people never find their other half
But there, in my heart your name was craft

We shared our moments

You were all that was important
Our lives revolve around each other
That’s why separation was harder
For conjoined twines separation left a scar of happiness
For us it scared the heart of loneness
.
*but after all* I realize
-it took us physically apart
But your still here in my heart
.the letters of life each week
The ones I run home to seek
You write your life to me
I write my life to you
It aint the same as before
But we still laugh & cried together at our live
You are my diary, as I am yours
You keep the pieces of my life
As
I keep the pieces of your life

*you keep the pieces of my life”


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Comments:

This is one beautifull poem.I like it.Its really beautiful.It's the kinda way that I feel now too....Great poem! :)

Posted: Jun 24, 2008

Author Comment:

lol.. ok..
thanx 4 reading

what a beautiful poem, i totally love!!!
xo
DOM!!
XD

Posted: Jul 25, 2008

Author Comment:

.x

thanx

Nice job. You can sell it as a song! haha. Great one.

Posted: Oct 14, 2008

Author Comment:

lol..
song
never thought of that??

.x peace

You always remember your first love...you will never forget them, and pieces of them will remain with you forever.

Posted: Oct 18, 2008

Author Comment:

ummm.. i think this was writen to a best friend more like it...
lol

thanx for reading

.x peace

I love this... it sounds like me and my best friends in soo many ways.... We were together for soo many years and when we graduated 8th grade and now that we are in high school.. every things different... we never see eachother and can rarely catch eachother on the phone....
Good Job!!!

Posted: Oct 20, 2008

Author Comment:

thanx...

.x peace



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