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I Don't Want

Poem By: AngelaSteele
Poetry


Tags: i, don\'t, want

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Submitted: Jul 17, 2008    Reads: 94    Comments: 15    Likes: 10   


I Don’t Want
Kisses to shut down,
Blood to be sold.
The wind to be bought,
Or breaths to be obtained.
I Don’t Want
The wheat to burn and bread to scrimp.

I Don’t Want
There to be coldness in the houses,
Or terror in the streets,
Nor rage in one’s eyes.

I Don’t Want
For lips to encase secrets,
Or coffers to conceal millions,
Nor the innocent be locked up.

I Don’t Want
The creek to function without water,
The sailor to travel without a compass,
The factory not to have flowers,
The aurora not to be visible in the coal mine,
For teachers not to laugh.

I Don’t Want
Mothers not to wear perfumes,
Young women to be loveless,
For fathers not to have their drinks.
Children not to have presents,
On Christmas Eve.

I Don’t Want
For the earth to split in half,
For the oceans to be divided,
The winds to be claimed by flags.
There to be symbols on uniforms.

I Don’t Want

For children and mothers to march,
With guns perched on their shoulders;
Nor missiles to be launched
Or missiles ever to be fabricated.

I Don’t Want
Them to send me whoever,
And look them in the eyes,
Only to have them shot in front of me.

I Don’t Want

For them to adhere postage stamps on me,
Send me to countries unknown,
Or for them to hide true poetry.

I Don’t Want
To love in secret,
Cry in secret,
Sing in secret.

And even more…

I Don’t Want
Them to tape my mouth shut
When I say ‘
I DON’T WANT…'


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Comments:

Now write the opposite side and show us what you do want. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us Angela.

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol. Hmm. Okey doke :) Thanks so much. I may not have time to write it right away though... I'll get it up as soon as I can.

its okay, it makes sence, as for me I DON'T WANT SOME THINGS>>> I don't want to be left alone i this world without all my friends. thats friends like you...
Your poem is okay but try and write the opposite side just as said

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

Author Comment:

:) Thanks so much for your input. I appreciate it!

nah i think its fine with the don't wants. its too often in poetry we hear the voice of what we DO want. i think this was clever to say what you don't want.

i really loved this poem. there were so many unique phrases in here that i hadn't thought about. you took a simple object... and to me it seemed like you gave it a meaning and a purpose.

a flag in the wind.
a sailor and his compass
mothers and perfume

the list goes on, but those were some of my favorites. its like... when you put one with the other, the yin with the yang, it suddenly brought it to a new level.

very beautiful angela :)
you never fail to impress!

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much Alice! :P

That's really good! Stanza four is my favorute:

I Don’t Want
The creek to function without water,
The sailor to travel without a compass,
The factory not to have flowers,
The aurora not to be visible in the coal mine,
For teachers not to laugh.


That is so good! I really like this!

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you!!! :) I appreciate it!

Excellent write, Angela! Vivid imagery and clever phrasing that captures the reader. I agree with Alice... it's perfect the way it is with the "I don't wants" I honest and true loved this piece.

Peace and love.....Jerry

Posted: Jul 18, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank You Jerry :) I appreciate it!

wow, this was very strong!!! great to see this side of you, it's always good to yell out what you believe in, and I would never tape your mouth shut:P lol. this was great!!!
Steph(:

Posted: Jul 22, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much STEPH!! :)

I DON'T WANT

You to stop writing this is great, Angela!
Definitely a fan of this one. Come by my poem, A Winter Flame.
Take care!!

Posted: Jul 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Aww. Thanks :) I won't stop, trust me. I'll check out your work as soon as I can :)

hi! angela. i agree with all the "i don't want". freedom of speech is everyone's right and everyone has a right to opine, whether others agree or no. but WHAT IS IT U WANT. and if u want something, tell it to the world. yo! ;-)

Posted: Jul 26, 2008

Author Comment:

:) Thank you so much Bubbly!! I'll get on it as soon as I can.

Beautiful - wrenched my heart written from a 15 year old with such a wise heart and talented pen!

Posted: Aug 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you so much. It means a lot. :)

This really explains the things that are going on in the world and makes me think deeper than I've been. This is good

Posted: Aug 9, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm glad. Thank you so much :)

You want to know what i don't want, Angela? I'll tell you what I don't want. I don't want you to ignore my phone calls!!! pick up, pick up, pick up!


Brilliant peom as always, Angie; but I'm sad. You haven't written anything in a while. :( Post something!

Posted: Aug 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Oops :( sorry. I'll try and post somethign today, I promise!

Diz iz deep & need 2 go GLOBAL. I repeat "GLO-BAL" Diz iz a good poem and a speech dat needz 2 be given 2 some of these people in the U.S.
So they can understand watz gonna happen in da future, if we dont make a change.
LOVE IT!!!!
:)

Posted: Sep 8, 2008

Author Comment:

I love YOU!! Thanks again!

WELL DONE...I am proud that you are my friend and how i wish i get some of urs sensitivity to various issues around us...in this poem u have explained the world around us no matter where we live...

I was devasted by the bomb blasts and so many casualities and death of innocent people in India...in recent past...what is Govt doing ? No idea....i wish Govt do something concrete...i hate these politicians who once they come to power, just forget everything for the next 5 years...till next season of election comes....I am sure GOD is watching the WORLD and HE would do the final justice...

this is my Fav again...

Posted: Sep 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Pratibha, you just made my day. :) Thank you so much. You truly are a great friend.

I really like this..it was unique in a good way. =)

Posted: Oct 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you :)

I am moved and inspired...thank you. Very good work, very expressive. I can feel the outrage, the anger, and the hope in your words.

Posted: Oct 13, 2008

Author Comment:

I appreciate it. Thank you dearly. :)



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