Between an image of yourself,
And another image of you,
The world instantly stops.
It is suspense. And my life
Is that bird clinging onto the cable
Of high tension,
After the discharge.
Publish. Read. Get Read.
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Poem By: AngelaSteele
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Yet another poem I wrote last night... :) View table of contents...
Submitted: Jun 24, 2008 Reads: 49 Comments: 13 Likes: 8
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I love all your work. This seems simple but draws various interpretations from the reader.
Posted: Jun 24, 2008
wow, simple and complicated at the same time. you are absolutely brilliant no doubt about it!!!
STeph(:
Posted: Jun 24, 2008
ooo i really like those first 3 lines. my jaw dropped when i read them! i was like daaaang. and then i read those last few lines and i was like daaang! lol you've knocked the words out of me again XD
with so little lines you express so much ^^
Posted: Jun 24, 2008
Such a short poem that says so much. Makes think.
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Posted: Jun 24, 2008
Ooh another creative piece that gets my mind thinking.
~DarkFairy~
Posted: Jun 24, 2008
wow i liked it a lot. it was sort but very good :)
tillz
Posted: Jun 25, 2008
i like it:]
Posted: Jun 25, 2008
OMGGG. I'm just totally speechless. Well, maybe not cuz I'm still gonna comment.. :d It's short, yet compelling. A very beautiful piece, I say.
Posted: Jun 25, 2008
i have no idea what you just wrote!
Sorry, my mind is not working really quick right now!
i like how it's short, though!
Posted: Jun 25, 2008
Diz poem reminds me of "Man In the Mirror" from Micheal Jackson.
The message it holds.
Posted: Jun 27, 2008
This poem is a weird one, but it doesn't mean its not good! very short and snappy, but gets the message across really well!
To be able to fit a message into 7 lines is absolutely genius! You are a very talented writer. What I would give to be able to write like you!
Megzbo-x
Posted: Jun 28, 2008
I liked it a lot. I worried for the bird. Lol you know I love birds.
Posted: Jul 1, 2008
that bird for sure....i have had this feeling of being in suspension so many times myself.....
lol...how to get back....get back to normalcy...
Posted: Jul 3, 2008
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