In my dream...
I fell...
Then I awoke.
In reality...
I fell...
I then awoke.
On the cliff...
I fell...
I never woke up.
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My awkward Deja Vu
Poem By: AngelaSteele
Poetry
I thought this was also funny... I can't stop laughing, but then again this is my sick sense of humor. View table of contents...
Submitted: Jun 3, 2008 Reads: 40 Comments: 4 Likes: 3
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Comments:
oh jeez, how tragic, lol. I'm glad you were laughing when you wrote this cuz honeslty I laughed at the end too, hehe. Really really great angela. LOVED it, lol.
Steph(:
Posted: Jun 3, 2008
I see no humor at all!!
This is pain, torture...Oh my...
We can never feel something unless we wake up from dreaming. But yes, even sometimes, dreams hurt..
Such a masterpiece Angela.
Posted: Jun 4, 2008
Interesting... it was a bit funny, but not to me. ^^ I like its simplicity.
Posted: Jun 7, 2008
LAL...It'z aliitle funny, but sad.
Give 8.5 out of 10.
Posted: Jun 8, 2008
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