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My Garden

Poem By: AngelaSteele
Poetry


Tags: love, garden, war

For all those brave souls, who have sweethearts overseas fighting for their country. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Feb 27, 2008    Reads: 88    Comments: 7    Likes: 4   


When love is a as grand as the universe is infinite,
There is no telling what it is capable of.

So darling, that day you left I planted a rose;
The next day I planted one more.

Then I figured, if I planted a rose for everyday I thought of you,
Darling, I would walk in a garden forever.

So, please, please don't give up hope,
There is not always enough to go around.

When you return from overseas,
We will be together again.

Then we can walk in my garden together,
Until the end of time.


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Comments:

aweee. that is so cute!

Posted: Feb 27, 2008

Author Comment:

:) Thanks, I'm glad someone liked it. I thought of it while listening to Claire De Lune... the song.

aww. i love it! that opening line is amazing. that pulled me in. a beautiful poem.

Posted: Mar 4, 2008

Author Comment:

Yay.. I was inspired to write this one when I was listening to Claire De Lune (the song) :)

k, i like REALLY love your stuff. hahaha, you're brilliant!
Steph:)

Posted: Mar 24, 2008

Author Comment:

Aww. Thanks :)

AWw. This is soo sweet :)

Posted: Apr 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Aww thank you. I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reading.

awww, that was really good. so lovely haha. Please chack out some of my work, I think you'll like it:)
Tilla

Posted: Apr 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks for commenting :) I'll be sure to read your work soon.

This is real good, 13 thumbs up!! I agree with Steph because she is gorgeous. Please read my stuff hey why not.

Posted: Apr 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol. Thanks for reading. I'm glad you liked it :)

i have always felt strongly for the soldiers fighting on the borders for us....their families live in constant tension and they certainly don't have a normal life...life which I have taken for granted so many times...now, i know....
this cheerful poem will cheer them up...like music to the soul.....

Posted: Jul 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks again. :) Your comments I have to say are making my day :)



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