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Submitted: Jun 24, 2008 Reads: 59 Comments: 16 Likes: 9
Fountains unite with the river
And the river with the ocean.
The celestial winds mix
Forever with calm emotion.
Nothing is singular in the world:
Everything abides divine chores
It is found in the spirit.
Why not mine with yours?
Mountains kiss the sky,
Waves link with others.
What flower would be forgiven
If it despised its brothers?
The sunlight on the earth
And the moon kisses the seas:
Why this sweet task
When later you will not kiss me?
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oh my gosh!!!! Your best one yet. I'm serious, this is completely devine angela, I can't even put to words how lovely this poem is. I bow down to you and your awsomness, lol. you are amazing!!!!
Steph(:
Posted: Jun 24, 2008
Tender and beautiful. I love the hint at destiny or destiny thwarted, in it. It speaks to something in me, something that wishes to not be "singular" to find the river that meets my ocean and the mountain that kisses my sky. You have me rambling now. But truly an amazing piece the emotions portrayed are heartbreakingly beautiful.
Posted: Jun 24, 2008
Now this one I understand. Excellent poem.
Posted: Jun 24, 2008
*speechless*
this is absolutely beautiful
the words you used.
everything
and sorry about my horrible spelling
I loved it.
:]
Posted: Jun 24, 2008
this is BEAUTIFUL..and captivating....
Posted: Jun 24, 2008
woow! very very beautiful and the imagery was incredible! love it!
i have commenters block :(
so i apologize in advance for leaving short comments
Posted: Jun 24, 2008
Once again, another excelent poem, full of emotion.
Posted: Jun 24, 2008
Ooh, very beautiful, the imagery is all inspiring. Now my brain is spinning with vivid colors and images. Well done.
~DarkFairy~
Posted: Jun 24, 2008
ok my favorite part of this pome was
-Fountains unite with the river
And the river with the ocean.
The celestial winds mix
Forever with calm emotion.
Nothing is singular in the world:
Everything abides divine chores
It is found in the spirit.
Why not mine with yours?
Mountains kiss the sky,
Waves link with others.
What flower would be forgiven
If it despised its brothers?
The sunlight on the earth
And the moon kisses the seas:
Why this sweet task
When later you will not kiss me?
-i loved this so much it was all good. lol
tillz
Posted: Jun 25, 2008
i like it keep up the good work
Posted: Jun 25, 2008
Hey Angelaaa........I simply love your poems. Like everyone said, the imaginary established by your words is just amazing. Good job. =]
Posted: Jun 25, 2008
Diz iz relaxing if u put one of thoze background soundz in it. Like it!!!
:)
Posted: Jun 27, 2008
This is deep!
I love how you have addressed love and da lines about the mountains kissing the sky. A beautiful use of personification!
Megzbo-x
Posted: Jun 28, 2008
What flower would be forgiven if it despises its brothers. I loved the poem
Posted: Jul 1, 2008
the last line took my breath away....passionate yet sad...
Posted: Jul 3, 2008
Very beautiful poem...Ted
Posted: Jul 6, 2008
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