When you become mute,
When I become blind,
We will still have our hands
And silence.
When you become old,
When I turn old,
We will still have lips
And silence.
When you die,
When I too, die,
They will have to bury us together
In silence.
When you revive,
And I live again,
We will continue to love each other
In silence.
And when everything ends,
Forever in the universe,
It will be a silence of love
The silence.
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Silence of Love
Poem By: AngelaSteele
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Submitted: Jun 13, 2008 Reads: 85 Comments: 23 Likes: 12
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Wow!! this poem was amazing! Keep going, man!
Posted: Jun 13, 2008
one word....WOW
Posted: Jun 13, 2008
I love reading romance poemz, and u made a homerun with diz one.
Posted: Jun 13, 2008
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AWE!! I so pictured some old man reciting that to his wife.. and it was just sooooo CUTE!! lol.
Anyway.. really nice work.
I loved it. :D
~!~Megan~!~
Posted: Jun 13, 2008
You are my official favorite. ^^
Posted: Jun 14, 2008
Wow..this is so powerful and beautiful. Amazing job, keep it up!
Posted: Jun 14, 2008
Wow... That was beautiful :)
Posted: Jun 14, 2008
Love beyond life in time maybe the one and only way love should really be defined. Nicely Done.
Posted: Jun 14, 2008
true love is forever :)
i looooooved this poem! it made me think of The Notebook and how at the end they are holding each other in their arms. *sighs* good movie.
and fabulous poem ^^
Posted: Jun 15, 2008
I absolutely loved it. it was so amazing. I am so picturing my grandparents right now its so sweet.
Posted: Jun 16, 2008
ya im going to have to say you are my fav writer ! ! ! ! well i luved this...
tillz
Posted: Jun 18, 2008
Nice. Silence, solitude, tranquility..all good places to be.
Posted: Jun 18, 2008
Ayyyy. So cuteeee. =]
Posted: Jun 22, 2008
wow, very powerful poem angela, whooo, knocked the breath right out of me, lol. great poem!
Steph(:
Posted: Jun 22, 2008
Wow.
such a beautiful poem!
loved it
:]
Posted: Jun 22, 2008
Wow. That was amazing. Such nice work, such powerful images. I loved it.
Posted: Jun 23, 2008
Very dream-like in its quality, well written with no padding - I think my friend Irwin would have liked it too.
Posted: Jun 23, 2008
I found this sad, but really good...like a mindtrip
Posted: Jun 28, 2008
I loved the poem, Angela.
Posted: Jul 1, 2008
And when everything ends,
Forever in the universe,
It will be a silence of love
The silence.
CAN I HUG YOU FOR THIS BEAUTIFUL POEM.....LOVELY, knocked my souls and came inside my heart
Posted: Jul 3, 2008
This was great. Such a simple piece, but so true. Love isn't just about finishing each other's sentences, it's about being totally comfortable, even in silence. It reminds me of those elderly people you see at church or at the park, they look so wrinkled but they're holding hands as if they're twenty. I loved it!
I'd appreciate it if you could read and comment on my novel "Love in G Minor" it's also kind of about love, and the difference between a meaningless fling and a person that will always be there. I'd love comments! Thanks!!!!
Posted: Jul 11, 2008
aww..this is such a sweet poem!XD
Very simple and a great message too:-)
I would be glad if you could comment on my poems.
Thanks!
Take care^_^
Posted: Aug 16, 2008
You captured a love in this poem that hits many levels. Breaking free from the bonds of modern day romance but back into a time when "happily ever after" exsisted. A strong pillar of lights illuminates from your poem both from words and music. Each word seemed picked by an artist hand. Your hand. Thankyou for sharring it.
Posted: Sep 16, 2008
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