What is the sin,
Of the enamored
That with bitterness
Resist the torture
Of watching their aspirations
Reflected in their dreams?
The light of the moon
Hits my shell,
Dreaming that you love me.
A wound to the heart,
And to see around me,
Solely desolation.
I waited this time
For a sign of your love.
But found once more
A full failure, a fall
That leaves us dying.
What does dreaming
Bring us, the enamored?
Some of us look for it,
But not everyone thinks like I do.
I dream of open eyes that do not rest.
My idle mind does not tire
From dreaming of you.
I know that my idea of love,
Is nothing original,
But...
For the causes of love
There is a marginal world.
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Poem By: AngelaSteele
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Submitted: Jun 24, 2008 Reads: 46 Comments: 13 Likes: 7
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what I would give for one day to be in that head of yours. seriously, you are definately up there for the most talented writters on here and for my favorites too:) You're words are so completely beautiful it truly strikes me. bravo ma belle!
STeph(:
Posted: Jun 24, 2008
I have to confess that my opinion is opposite to that of steph's , my mind is endless but yours is too dynamic for this poor old soul. Still the poetry is good!
Posted: Jun 24, 2008
I'm jealous
(that's a good thing)
your so talented...
I loved this poem as I do all the rest of yours
Posted: Jun 24, 2008
i've concluded that you are a prodigy child.
a writing poetry prodigy - yup. thats you.
lovely poem angela! :)
Posted: Jun 24, 2008
A lovely poem with lots of depth. You are soooo talented. ^_^
Posted: Jun 24, 2008
Ooh you should write more poems on your birthday, they are so amazing!
~DarkFairy~
Posted: Jun 24, 2008
okie i really loved this one.AWESOME man.
tillz
Posted: Jun 25, 2008
that is a really good poem
Posted: Jun 25, 2008
Hm, I like it a lot. =]
Posted: Jun 25, 2008
now, i get this one and it's very g8!
sorry, i don't usually use slang like this.
but xcellent work here!
Posted: Jun 25, 2008
Okay, diz one iz a little confusing.
Posted: Jun 27, 2008
I couldn't really relate to this poem and i couldn't really understand it which really frustrated me cause i know this poem is probably fantastic like the others!
Maybe you could tell me what you rea trying to bring across in this poem? Thanks.
Megzbo-x
Posted: Jun 28, 2008
Awesome poem. You are good!!!
Posted: Jul 1, 2008
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