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Candle Stick Life

Poem By: angelgirl
Poetry


This is a challenge response for xBrokenHeartedx challenge.

I had to write a poem or story about a theme or object she gave me. I chose to write it in the perspective of the object she gave me. Which was a a used lit candle.

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Submitted: Jul 30, 2008    Reads: 37    Comments: 1    Likes: 0   


Candle Stick Life
X BrokenHeartedX Challenge Response
On top of the cupboard,
I have the view of the world.
The view of my world.
The kitchen with the yellow walls
The table with the brown wooden legs.
This is my home.
Every night I feel the shocking heat on my head,
That lasts for hours on end.
It does not bother me,
I am used to it.
So what am I sitting on top of the cup board,
Looking over my world?
Feeling a shocking heat every night
For hours on end?
Why I am a candlestick.
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Comments:

Candlesticks have very interesting lives. Great job!

Posted: Aug 9, 2008

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Thank you! I'm glad people are liking it!



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