This is a poem i wrote for Mystory's Challenge. She gave me 4 words and I had to use the words in a poem or short stroy.

My Words:
1. Music

2. Life

3. Sweet

4. Caring

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Submitted: Jul 30, 2008    Reads: 45    Comments: 2    Likes: 0   

 

Forgotten

 

Sitting at my window.

 

Waiting for you.

 

Music blaring in my ear.

 

I don’t hear it.

 

And it’s your fault.

 

You hurt me beyond repair.

 

Your sweet and caring facade was all a lie.

 

You’re the one who made me numb, unaware, of life.

 

It’s all your fault.

 

You aren’t going to be forgiven, but forgotten.

 

Forgotten.

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mystory

Very nice. I really liked how you used your words. Very clever. Great job. ^^

Posted: Jul 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

Flying Piggy

I like it. Great job!

Posted: Aug 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Gratzi!

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