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Submitted: May 31, 2008 Reads: 55 Comments: 10 Likes: 3
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cute! I think you forgot the season "autumn" though
Posted: May 31, 2008
I like it.this way you would never forget the seasons.
Posted: Jun 1, 2008
The poem givez desciptionz on how they r seasonz. Itz good.
Posted: Jun 1, 2008
It's the circle of life my friend^_^-- me like, me like^_^!
Lot's of special chocolate,
Ghiradelli Girl.
Posted: Jun 1, 2008
Oh ummm-- something that you should change is in this line: And the fire place warms are hands.
The are should be "our." Just telling you^_^.
Posted: Jun 1, 2008
nice! very good!
Posted: Jun 10, 2008
hi! angel. ha! haa!! haaa!!! i loved it, i loved it, i loved it. lol. ;-)
Posted: Jun 13, 2008
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Posted: Jun 18, 2008
I came to read this piece on the recommendation of Bubbly... happy I did... nicely done!... I have a similar piece called "As Seasons Change"... hope you have time to check it out.... write on my friend!
Posted: Jun 20, 2008
this is a good one!! i love nature and seasonal stuff!!
Posted: Aug 28, 2008
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