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A silhouette of dark and light

Poem By: AngelofTheNight
Poetry


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Submitted: May 22, 2008    Reads: 31    Comments: 5    Likes: 2   


The withering night

eats away at my soul

Yet I feel happy..

Your smile, Your love watching over me

I feel whole...

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Letting the black devour my soul

You wrap your wings around me

My angel of the night..

I love you

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Not a single word

I listen, to the melody of your heart

Fly away, my love, be free...

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Your arms protect me from raging storms

our love intertwined, we are one

A silhouette of dark and light

As a million words connect at your touch.

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My eyes close slowly

At the comfort of your whispers

A silent tear, a thousand prayers

Let me go....

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The warmth of the rising sun ,

The daylight gives in,

Your grasp still lingers..

Goodbye my angel of the night..


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Comments:

Whoa...dis poem is something..you got an aotn..oooohhhhh...i like dis poem, give it an 8/10.

Posted: May 23, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you :) Oh and about your other comment, the angel of the night I'm referring to in this poem, is NOT me. Lol. Thank you for commenting and rating also :) Take care xx

wait a sec, u r aotn..my bad...

Posted: May 23, 2008

Author Comment:

huh?

oh, i thought the aoth was you....my bad..and sorry 4 the 2nd comment.

Posted: May 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol it's ok. :)

hi! nancie. its a warm and lingering poem. enjoyed it a lot. lol. ;-)

Posted: Jun 13, 2008

Author Comment:

Hey Bubbly. Thank you for the nice comment, I'm glad you enjoyed it.^_^

I have only one comment to add here- this one is cute and sweet and BRILLIANT....

Posted: Jun 16, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you ^_^



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