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"That Girl"

Poem By: AngelofTheNight
Poetry


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Submitted: Jun 21, 2008    Reads: 24    Comments: 5    Likes: 3   


I'm that girl that holds a smile on her face,

even when things are a mess and her faith falls out of place,

I'm that girl who believes in taking chances for what I want,

instead of pretending to be happy as someone I'm not .

                                      *   


I'm that girl who's not afraid to let her emotions show,

and learns to go on as her feelings start to grow,

I'm that girl who would never give up on the love of her life,

because there are two paths she can make the wrong or the right,

I'm that girl who would travel a million miles away,

just to find the love that shes been waiting for everyday.

I'm that girl who doesn't care about what other people think of my style,

the one that savors every moment even if its only for a little while,

I'm that girl that can always keep a secret,

I'm shy but inside, I could be screamin',

I'm that girl who kisses but doesn't believe,

because she's afraid if she lets go and then her love would leave.

                         *


I'm that girl that people call weird, random, and dramatic,

but theres more to me if you'll listen behind all the noise and static,

I'm that girl that can cry and laugh all at the same time,

the one that's innocent looking but can commit a heartbroken crime,

I'm that girl that trys hard to push herself through,

the one that dosen't care if she'll ever fit in tobe kool.

                         * 


I'm that girl you can call unperfect,

My hairs always a mess,

I'm under alot of pessure and all the stress,

I'm called an outcast compared to the rest,

if it were up to me I'll say I come in second best.

I'm that girl who loves to laugh,

The one who carves her own life path,

I don't always have things under control

But theres always a brightside, with so much more hope

                       *                


I'm that girl that loves to dream,

but this reality is not what it seems,

a fairytale ending waiting to come true,

another risk worth taking what does she have to lose?

I'm that girl who can never prove what she can really do,

because she gives up to easily but none really knew,

instead shes judged by others that are strangers to her eyes,

bottled up with any goodbyes and silent cries for help,

but no ones there so she has to rely on herself...

I'm that girl,

and this is my world...

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Comments:

This has all the emotions and turmoil a normal teenager feels...i am sure after writing this , u r feeling lots better.....there is clarity of thoughts and u have good reasoning behind ur actions....GOD bless u sweety

Posted: Jun 21, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you for the lovely comments, Pratibha. I am feeling much better lol :D Take care xx

Diz iz excellent!! Love it!!! A couple, na mostly everything about me. And im happy 2know dat ur feeling better.

Posted: Jun 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks!! :D im happy to know you read my poem lol love ya's!

I AME BACK AGAIN TO READ THIS....BECAUSE I LOVED IT SO MUCH.....

U SURE ARE A STAR...

Posted: Jul 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Awwww thank you honey. :) You're too kind *blushes* You're welcome to read anytime lol

Very Good.I Love The Way You Express It In Different Emotions.

Posted: Jul 11, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you very much ^_^

This was great. I made my daughter read it and she sat here and read it multiple times. Wonderful.

Posted: Oct 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Awww thank you. :) that's cute



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