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Something I wrote while I was thinking about alot of stuff, so I just let my pen flow, I got lost myself while writing this, but I hope you like it. ^^ View table of contents...

 

Submitted: May 14, 2008    Reads: 36    Comments: 6    Likes: 2   


Why is it that we're always

Fighting against time?

Why is it that hope dies

And we give up on trying?

Why is it that these questions

Penetrate my pure mind?

Why is it that most of us

Are locked in our heads, crying?

Why doesn't anyone listen to

Our silent prayers, we beg?

Why doesn't anyone come

To wipe the tears we've shed?

Why is it that people hate you

For being who you are?

Why is it that the world

Is polluted with the wars?

When all thats left around you

Is the memories we sieze to forget..

All thats left, may lose it's wealth

Except for hearts that met

All may die of blackness

But love will truly shine

So open your eyes and free your mind

Before you're left behind...


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Comments:

It gives a very... jumbled feeling. Not sure if that makes sense, but I like it. Thank you for writing.

Posted: May 14, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm glad you like it, thank you for reading and commenting. :D

Your future bf and supreme sadist matt
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Omg so deep :D I love it and i less than 3 you

Posted: May 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol. Thanks, I less than 3 you too :P

wow real good i liked it. =]

Posted: May 20, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you :D

TTT (tell the truth) dis poem is confusing to me..sorry...

Posted: May 23, 2008

Author Comment:

Lol, it's alright. I'm sorry it confused you T_T it is indeed very confusing though.

AMEN !

This poem opens lots of closed doors....for me

THANKS AGAIN SWEETHEART

Posted: Jun 16, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha, I'm glad. You're welcome hun, thanks for reading and commenting. :)

Pretty cool. Alot of questions that need to be answerd.Keep up the good work.You should check out my poem about dreams. It makes you think to.

Posted: Jul 8, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks! I'll check em out =]



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