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This is about how time never stops and we create evils that follow us around and the only thing we can do to defeat them is to keep going. Its all about how we control our destiny, nothing is fate View table of contents...
Submitted: Jul 14, 2008 Reads: 31 Comments: 3 Likes: 1
This is the calling
Know you are alive
Revolutions never hault
Never counter clock
Forever forward
Follow or be stepped on
Running into the distance
Stop before you bleed
Jagged crown at your side
Shadows follow
Arms descend
Surreal it seems
Deeper to fall
Desperation calls
But its never fate
And it starts with one
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Heya, I really enjoyed this poem, the tone was very appropriate for the message of the poem, which I also enjoyed immensely. The imagery was descriptive and appropriate, so overall, good work ^-^ My only suggestion is that the poem could be a little less confusing with more punctuation, lol, I'm a nut on punctuation.
Great work :) And keep it up!
Posted: Jul 14, 2008
well done angie:)!! i like this one
Posted: Jul 25, 2008
I'm to corrupt to just forget
so scattered scarred and beaten that
no time could mend whats broken
such pain unspoken
on me I'm choking here
All I want is to forget
Erase and replace all traces that
In fear my dreams were frozen
Eyes not open
On lost time I'm choking here
could it be me,
Or do you feel alone here
Path so unclear
No roads lead back home?
Is it just me,
Or is it the whole worlds ending
and your pretending
That everything's alright?
Nowhere safe to set your pearls
lost broken lonely little girl
You left your only true hope
on a dark icy slope
you choose to slide
Posted: Aug 7, 2008
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