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My Salvation

Poem By: angie sass
Poetry


this is a little darker. it is about the things we carry throughout our lives. lies, pain, people, deceit. the only onway to get rid of these demons is to realize them. although i am talking about specific people in my life, they are different for everyone. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 26, 2008    Reads: 42    Comments: 3    Likes: 1   


I will feed you strength

I tried to carry your cross

I let you down

Now I bear you crown of thorns

You pushed your crown into my skin

Tears caress the ground I walk

I will still break your fall

And you will walk on my pain

But my strength will absolve you

Pain eases your pain

Close your eyes to see

You follow the distance and it follows you

Your mask yields many more

No one can save you but me

You cling to memories

You say you care for me

But you only love yourself

Looking out for no one but one

I will prevail and you will follow my lead.


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Comments:

OMG this was absolutly beautiful! I was acutally going to make a poem with the same title, but it was already taken, so know I know what poem it was used for. But really, you truely deserve to own this title with this poem. It was beautiful!

Posted: Jul 3, 2008

Author Comment:

wow, thank you so much! i really appreciate that. i read some of your stuff as well and you are very talented. I would love to read the one you were going to title 'my salvation'. let me know what you title it so I can read it :)

ahhh!!! my brain is exploding with awsomeness. you write very well. you can feel the pain, but overcoming the pain as well.

Posted: Jul 17, 2008

Tony
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Yes, I was here.

Posted: Aug 7, 2008



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