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Vanity Swirls Beneath

Poem By: angie sass
Poetry


Something for everyone. its about how only people who love for the sake of love will prosper in this world. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 26, 2008    Reads: 18    Comments: 3    Likes: 2   


Onslaught of the ability to reason
takes itself the prisoner of
consumption and commerce.
The imbeciles of mankind litter and
spread their poison.
It leaks and seeps into and
throughout the veins of the whole
Greater good becomes greater evil.
Vanity swirls beneath and nips at the
heals of the weak
Rich in power and poor in espiritu
becomes in itself, the opposite.
Only the truly intrinsic soul will
prosper in this foggy universe.
True love and beauty will relieve
Only one can decide for one
The truth is within and came before
original sin.
Love is the only truth
Answer her calling.


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Comments:

I quite enjoy this piece. It has a steady rhythm to it and flows well to the definitive conclusion of truth in love. I like your perspective and you seem to have a way with descriptive words that paints a clear picture in the reader's mind to accompany the text. Nice work Angie I'm impressed.

Posted: Jul 6, 2008

Author Comment:

thank you so much! i cant wait to read yours

total rad sauce, i like it. a deep and solid underlying intensity, nice work!

Posted: Jul 17, 2008

U know who
(not registered user)

I was and am true intrinsic love. And I am the closest to unconditional love you will have ever known. And no one else will ever be let into your weird little worlds as deep as I was, nor you into mine.

Posted: Aug 7, 2008



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