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A CHILDS DAY OUT

Poem By: Animesh
Poetry


Its a casual poem about how the pressures of surviving in the world today have led us to forget the kid inside us which symbolizes simplicity,innocence,uncomplicated behaviour and the truth. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 25, 2008    Reads: 40    Comments: 3    Likes: 1   


JUST ANOTHER DAY

I was walking along the beach,
thinking about my social clout.
I was listening to the waves,
wondering wat my life was about.

A small kid passed me by,
running and playing with the sand.
His father not far behind,
trying to hold his hand.

He didn't seem worried,
not the least about the world.
All he seemed to think about,
was about a stone he had just hurled.

He made me think,
think about being free.
Free from all the thoughts,
and all the worries i was carrying in me.

Seemed like everyday was his day,
his every moment was worth a million rupee.
And all that he did,
was reminescent of a forgotten part of me.

It was then i realised,
that sumthin was absent.
Worrying about the ways of the world,
was how my days were being spent.

I wished i could break free of my shackled form,
wished i could live the life of a kid again.
I realised there were things i had to take care of,
but at least i could come to the beach again.


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Comments:

This was good I liked it.... goodjob

If you got the time I'd love for you to check out some of my work thanks a bunch !!

Posted: Jun 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Hey,thx james...went thru ur work...luvved it!!

this is soo good, i loved it! i guess this is the last poem of yours which i haven't read.. now i guess i can't wait for you to post some more things up, which i will read when i come back! great poem!

Posted: Jul 1, 2008

Author Comment:

Hey,thx a ton!! Will try continue posting good stuff,as soon as possible...cant wait for u to thru my next post...tc. :-)

YES this is indeed heartfelt one...

The same feelings which i go through while watching my son grow up...

how i wish were carefree again....it's tough but surely possible...what say buddy?

Posted: Jul 30, 2008

Author Comment:

Oh,yeah!!I agree with u...its possible,but how often??I guess every once in a while shld be fun!!I guess v need to do sumthin like this to feel free/unshackled sumtimes... :-)

Thx a ton,di!!Take care...



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