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This is a poem I wrote for an Australian poetry competition - the poem had to be no more than 20 lines and include the line "I couldn't believe my luck" - well no luck with a prize for this but it is very topical - I hope you might enjoy! View table of contents...
Submitted: Jul 30, 2008 Reads: 66 Comments: 7 Likes: 7
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er I think it must have been 25 lines!!??
Posted: Jul 30, 2008
Well, I've done internet meeting/dating and IT ROYALLY SUCKS Anna Therese! Big time! Many many liars in the world. Why lie? Why? It's almost like a begging playground. And so, with this poetry of yours, you've nailed it on the head. ABsolutely. There is also a chemistry that is found "on line" that quickly withers away in reality. That was a fun summer, if only for the sheer grasp on shallow-ness. I moved on quickly.
Also, I dreamt last nite that you came to Canada and we met. There was a fire in a house and we watched and you said "so this is Canada". I laughed, funny, I have no clue what you look like! Ha! But, it was definitely you and we took pictures. It was all odd AT. You brought a friend with you that had long brunette hair. We ate chocolate. *weird*
Ok? Ok. Great poetry for someone who hasn't experienced the reality, good job AT.
Posted: Jul 31, 2008
ha, a very funny poem. I can't believe you never won the competition? Even so, it's still a great poem
Posted: Jul 31, 2008
Very nice, Anna. Never tried Internet Dating...I lucked out, big time, prior to going on the Internet. I have met a few good people along the way however. I worry about the younger generation though. The Internet a good thing for a lot of reasons, but I still feel that it is a Pandora's Box. Well anyways, very nice poem, great job and Take Care, Ted
Posted: Aug 2, 2008
Hahahaha, its good Anna.
~katie
Posted: Aug 3, 2008
This poem could only have been written in the 21st century, possibly late 20th. A modernist in mind, a romantic at heart. Why not?
Posted: Aug 4, 2008
As usual, this one is nothing but STRAIGHT FORWARD and no beating about the bush....
YES HONEY, i agree with CLASSY word by word....U have excelled in bringing out the essence of IT acquaintance....
I must say , i am lucky to be here and get so many friends who stood by me when i am down....
I take this opportunity to THANK all of them....
Posted: Aug 11, 2008
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