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This was also written a while back, (and I apologise for submitting "old" work but some of it I am very proud of or enarmoured with) was published in Australia with a good review. It began as a descriptive poem after a savage but spectacular frost and developed into a poem about life and how a mother can only watch her children throughout their lives sometimes "learn the hard way" no matter how painful this is to her. View table of contents...
Submitted: Feb 16, 2008 Reads: 92 Comments: 14 Likes: 10
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FROST is so amazing
You really are a great writer
Keep Writing
-Krystina
Posted: Feb 16, 2008
Excellent poem, well constructed and words thoughtfully
chosen. Winters like I remember them - magic!
Posted: Feb 17, 2008
What an amazing poem, full of imagery. I was a handful as a child, and now that I'm a mom, I can relate to both sides!
MA
Posted: Feb 17, 2008
Very enjoyable read Anna, this is a precious one indeed* katie :)
Posted: Feb 17, 2008
Really great discriptive Poem loved it......Til Later Juliet
Posted: Feb 17, 2008
a very lovely piece, Anna. I never had children so I can only imagine how difficult to stand by and watch the error of their ways. Beautifully rendered.....Jerry
Posted: Feb 17, 2008
A really great piece!
Posted: Feb 17, 2008
Your imagery is so beautifully crisp - i've just had to go and turn the heating up! Lovely stuff.
Posted: Mar 4, 2008
this one brought me closer to my son's point of view....
so surreal...i loved this one so much....
Posted: May 21, 2008
Hi ANNA, i came back again sweetheart....This one is my Favorite....
Posted: May 24, 2008
This poem screams Mom. I love it. It has a simple beauty and speaks to the mothers who watch over us all thrugh our lives. The way they fret and yet have the courage to let go as we explore the wide world.
Posted: Jun 4, 2008
I love your poem. I can relate because my youngest son looks at me more as a grandmother than as a mother. His friends at school have young mothers and I walk with a limp and have to be careful of falling. He told me once that when he is with me he feels like I am his grandmother and I replied "Well if it makes you feel any better we can pretend that I am."
Posted: Jun 12, 2008
yes, FROST is amazing. it makes me think though of a fantasy world where two fairies wander through the bejeweled countryside. still is totally awesome.
Posted: Jul 18, 2008
"Frost" is exquisite! You describe the wonders of a wintry morn so well... I also liked the underlying meaning of the poem too. From the standpoint of a minor still living with her parents, I am in complete agreement that oftentimes a child must learn the hard way.
This was a delight to read!
By the way--are you Australian?
Posted: Sep 26, 2008
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