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I had the most delightful “chore” yesterday – harvesting and gathering my lavender! I can only tell you how delicious and fresh, beautiful and colourful was my labour of love in the following three haiku. View table of contents...
Submitted: Apr 7, 2008 Reads: 79 Comments: 15 Likes: 13
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Mesmerizing, sweeping. Please read some more of mine Anna. xxx
Posted: Apr 7, 2008
Nice, and very peaceful. i can almost smell the lavender now!
Posted: Apr 7, 2008
What an absoutely lovely trio of haikus, Anna!!! I've always loved lavender... now more than ever! You have convinced me to plant some this year so that I will have it every year from now on. Peace and love.....Jerry
Posted: Apr 7, 2008
excellent haiku, really relaxing I love lavender too, I have lavender in a pot on my boat.I like this so ave rated it as such.:)
Posted: Apr 7, 2008
OH BOY! I knew this would be good!!!
Thankyou Anna, I really got good feelings through this trio of sweeping beautys.
I like that word 'sweeping' eric used it up there and i thought it fit so well :-)
Posted: Apr 7, 2008
Anna lavender has its own smell of freshness i truely loved this you expressed it so well....Til Later :) Juliet
Posted: Apr 7, 2008
delightful.
Posted: Apr 7, 2008
It is incredible how smells, sounds ,places or small things let a mark on us . Beautiful Haikus .
Posted: Apr 7, 2008
short and simple but absolutely beautiful!! i'm usually not one too fond of short poems, however this is amazing! its so sweet and light and just lovely! excellent work and well done. you painted this breathtaking picture with only a few words. once again, just downright beautiful!
Posted: Apr 7, 2008
Well well well...I just realized that all your poetry sparks a memory for me....and isn't that what a great poet yearns? (a let me show you feeling).
For years I had lavender growing just outside my bedroom window and would wake up each morning (in summer) pleasantly in love with the fragrance.
Sigh.
Yet beautiful.
Posted: Apr 7, 2008
Anna Therese:
Fancifully well written, expressed and presented. Liked the use of color. Gave it an "I Like It" vote.
Happy trails,
Ed Bradley.
Posted: Apr 9, 2008
Oh, this was beautiful. I love Haiku and this was great. I can almost smell the lavender from reading it.
Posted: Apr 9, 2008
Ahhhh!
My second favorite flower!! (First is the gardenia)!! I absolutely love the poem. I can feel the softness in my hands as I read, and can literally smell it all around me.
MA
Posted: Apr 9, 2008
"Lavender soft sky
Echoes fragrant blue flowers
Caressing my arms"
EVEN I LOVED IT.........
Honestly liked it....
Posted: Apr 14, 2008
Hi AT! Nope, I still see Lavender on your page...was this what you were referring to? In all it's splendid aromatic beauty.
Posted: Aug 31, 2008
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