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MOTHER BEWARE

Poem By: Anna Therese
Poetry


As I eagerly await news of a new grand neice or nephew a poem springs to mind. Blend of maternal emotion and reality?? View table of contents...

 

Submitted: May 2, 2008    Reads: 95    Comments: 12    Likes: 7   


Mother beware

his early daunting presence

debilitating tiredness

worn like a trophy

a sickness of the kind

sends others to bed

seeking solace and sympathy

has us instead

smug, strong

(yet tender, vulnerable)

proud, protective

never to be as we were again

Mother beware

his painful, urgent push

to share our world

They told us it would be excrutiating

(why didn't we listen?)

Beware his tremulous cries

his constant needs

ignore our bleary eyes

to soothe his tears

Mother beware the future

for you have forgiven

forgotten already

the imprints of his growing

the scars of his arrival

Beware

Beware

It must be love.


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throughout the poem, i was thinking of me and my son...I could relate to it so well....With its easy pace and simplicity....MOTHERS are MOTHERS....right....Hey Anna,do write more on mothers...

Posted: May 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks Pratibha I may - I have lots of maternal poems stashed away.

Irwin
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Liked this one very much Anna, well written.

Posted: May 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks Irwin your comments always appreciated.

Mother beware, yes.... but in the end, love triumphs. mother rejoice! Lovely poem, Anna.....Jerry

Posted: May 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Yes I agree - rejoice is the ultimate word (was I a bit harsh?) Thanks for kind comment.

This reveals mixed sweet pains of love at birth and growth through the teens. It depicts the dawn of infancy and dusk of adulthood. They both results in unconditional love. One does not have to remember the reasons why one loves one's child so much. Pains bears love.

Posted: May 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Doubly sweet thanks Zeli.

This reveals mixed sweet pains of love at birth and growth through the teens. It depicts the dawn of infancy and dusk of adulthood. They both results in unconditional love. One does not have to remember the reasons why one loves one's child so much. Pains bears love.

Posted: May 2, 2008

Author Comment:

Beautiful thoughtful comment Zeli and was the way I wrote the poem. My neice had a boy!

Mothers are our ultimate lovers.^^

Posted: May 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Our "forever" lovers. Thanks Punishment.

Mothers , Mothers , Mothers...Mothers, can we say more? Beautiful poem Anna.

Posted: May 6, 2008

Author Comment:

A very sweet comment Jbortti - if it wasn't for mothers...

"Why didn't we listen?"
Makes me smile. You know, I barely remember the actual birthing pain.... Because now, I look into their eyes and realize that it was all worth it.
MA

Posted: May 7, 2008

Author Comment:

I must say it is all a thing of the past with me now too. Sort of re-surfaced with my neice who had a very prolonged labour. Would not swap it for the world though, no I am one of the lucky ones who could have children (and found a partner to have them with!) Thanks for reading.

I loved this. My mind kept jumping to my own children. When I was in labor with my son I remember thinking, "Ok! I've changed my mind now!" Its just a thought that makes me giggle now. Every mother knows that children are what its all about. This was a great one!

Posted: May 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much Lacey. It is the "end result" that is all important - I wanted to get across how from the very beginning, when the doctor first announces our pregnancy we are "maternal"

An impressive poem; enjoyed.

Posted: May 12, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much Terry, a fine accolade from someone I believe to be one of the finest poets on booksie.

Interesting poem. I like the flow and the strong grasping words.

Posted: May 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Wolffe appreciate your read and comment.

I could relate to this poem very well. I have six children, but the beware part is intriguing because you never know what to expect. One day you can be crying and the next day laughing so hard that you feel your insides will explode. Great poem I loved it.

Posted: Jun 12, 2008

Author Comment:

I can imagine with six children (I have four but I come from a family of nine) that you would relate very well Susan. You describe the ups and downs of motherhood well, a blend of so much emotion but ultimately a blend we would never prefer to not have.



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