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TAROT TEACHINGS/BLAME IT ON TAROT

Poem By: Anna Therese
Poetry


A fun experimental poem. Booksie hasn't replicated the exact formation (ie. all the first stanza should be in a square box shape! but you may appreciate what I tried to do with this?)
My small way of saying thank you to Tarot. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jul 5, 2008    Reads: 68    Comments: 16    Likes: 8   


My writing lives in a square box. I
house it neat and safe.    It is easily
 found.      Predictable as a hand me 
              down recipe, six egg (heads ) a cup
                                                             of sweetness, two slurps of vinegar
                                                             to sour the sweetness, some vanilla
                                                             to smooth out the sour - an Aussie
                                                             pavlova in fact.    Follow the recipe
                                                             and  the  finished shape varies little
                                                             
                                                             Nice and sweet and predictable is o
                                                             so comfortable but dull and boring
                                                             Tarot encourages me to explore out
                                                             side the square, to soar to places far
away
 
to think          
d
                                    a
                                    r
                                    i
                                    n
                                    g
 
                                     d        r           a          m         a          t           i           c
                                                                                                                                                different
 
to see dagger
shapes
and lurking
demons
and fiery
dragons
 where once there was merely words
so I skip merrily
outside my house
fling                            safe                             and                              neat                             to                        the
           
w         i                      
n          d          s
 
for a little while
                                    then scamper on home to my square box
                                    bed my writing down safely for the time
                                    not  wanting to  lose    it    in unfamiliar
                                    territory, slightly gleeful, like a naughty
                                    child who snuck out into the wilderness
                                    undiscovered and knows he will want to
                                    re-live the thrill some time soon.     And
                                    who knows? Looking beyond the square
                                    may become addictive – be prepared for
 this writer’s   e                     s                      c          a          p            e


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Comments:

And the last stanza was middle aligned with the escape word scampering away recklessly not conservatively as booksie would have it!!!

Posted: Jul 5, 2008

Nice, keep thinking outside the box, Anna Therese. Isn't it fun creating something different. I tried a challenge and got a (memoriam stanza, quatrain in iambic tetrameter with a ryhming scheme.) I had to look all that up, before I could even start. But I did it, it was hard, but fun. Check it out if you can.(Faith=Paradise) Ted.

Posted: Jul 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Ted like you I will need to look up the meanings of those words! I read your poem and left a comment (I hope?) it was excellent. It is fulfilling to be a bit innovative with poetry.

YA!!! ESCAPE!!!

Anyone, woohooo! i'm glad you're going there.

Woohooo!

Anyways, I really enjoyed this poem because I totally agree with you, stretching to where others' haven't been and writing outside of what is to be expected of poetry right now. I loved the poem too. ESCAPE!!!

:D I write experimental poems from time to time and none of them really turn out too well but I still like to experiment and hopefully sharpen some skills to use in latter poems. When someone writes something like you just did it really helps the writer even if the poem doesn't turn out great...

but yours did!

:D

Posted: Jul 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Controverse what a wonderful comment. Very kind. I am much more prone to experimentation now that writers like yourself and Tarot have pointed out some of the delicious results of looking beyond "normal" or "expected".

Gosh, this went above my head....but i loved the pattern....it is so different...

hiya ANNA, i cannot leave message on ur profile page ...something is wrong...

Posted: Jul 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Maybe booksie is playing up? Anyway you are happy to leave comments under my writing instead Pratibha. Yes, the pattern was very different because Booksie made it different again to what I had! It is all about trying to become more adventurous with my writing I think?

hi! anna. a little unusual pattern at first but the message comes out strong and clear. when u r different, it makes u stand apart.

by the way, did tarot read this out of box booksie experiment and realise what a great admirer he has in you.

this one is amazing. lol. ;-)

Posted: Jul 9, 2008

Author Comment:

I think Tarot knows how much help he has been to me - inspiration. His suggestions on "Tide Songs" mean I have a poem on computer most suitable for a publication outside booksie I believe if I so wish. Thanks for reading Bubbly.

Hmmm, I think even though booksie messed up the formatting, it looks really cool and really works well with overall tone and mood of the poem. Bravo.

Posted: Jul 9, 2008

Author Comment:

A thank you to a great "teacher". Thanks for reading and comment.
Think about joining my "challenge" soon.

I like it.........

Sometimes a poem works better if you move away from the standard format of the box

Peace

Boneman

Posted: Jul 10, 2008

Author Comment:

hanks so much Boneman, Tarot has taught me plenty but so have many others on booksie in different ways. I encourage you to join my "challenge" Boneman.

Smarty pants.
Love it.

Posted: Jul 10, 2008

Author Comment:

A clever little poem eh? (Blame it on Tarot!)

ah, what a pleasure to have such friend, he has to read this so he can know what a treasure he is :)
that's great Anna to have this influence in your writing skills, how wonderful! :)
~katie

Posted: Jul 11, 2008

Author Comment:

I hope Tarot will pop in one day to read? I am one who hates to "bother" people. Maybe he has already floated in and had a proud chuckle re his unsolicted protege!!!

hi Anna, I love this poem. It’s interesting to see what can inspire people to write and write differently. I think its human nature to have our securities and that includes poetry. follow a safe and trusted path so to speak, but I love experimental poems. I came across some ages back when I first read Dylan Thomas and his Vision and Prayer poems, I also enjoy reading different stuff I come across on booksie. I think some of these challenges have made people look at poetry in a different light, if more in content than structure. My own poems are pretty predictable but I’ve recently gone back to attempt to write in rhyming couplets as well as free verse. Some people feel this kind of poetry is somewhat restrictive, which I also thought, but when you get flowing its surprising how quickly the words come. I think sometimes people forget that poetry is art, and the artist experiments with technique, especially as they are confronted with new ideas. I also see art and poetry as expressing cultural origins and influences. Through “bookise’s world domination” I’d like to read more poems expressing this premise, but all too often people are drawn to the safe standard way of writing. I think a good challenge for this site would be one which puts emphasis on structure as well as content.
Anyway, sorry for the long comment. It is sure to say Anna your poem and poems inspire me, thank you for sharing!

Posted: Jul 13, 2008

Author Comment:

I would love to see some structure challenges thrown out as well as content! (altho' I keep putting down "yes" for challenges and then struggle to oblige) What you say is true. Poetry is indeed art as well as expression of emotion. Over the weekend I bought three volumes of modern poetry from a second hand store (so cheap!) and I am going to read more. I LOVE to read poetry, thought provoking poetry is great mental stimulation! Our town is about to hold a "Words in Winter" festival, with workshops, poetry readings, competitions (I've entered two poems, it is nationwide so even a third prize would see me stoked) - as you see Matthew a long response often gets a long one back!

never having studied the remotest thing about tarot , i looked in , you have given me food for thought , thanks for that , i love a challenge.

Posted: Jul 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Did you check out Tarot's page?? (Tarot is a writer with a wonderful command of language and poetry) Thanks for reading and your comment.

This poem reminded me a bit of e e cummings. It is wild and uninhibited. I felt a little bit of the escape that you felt when writing it. I think its lovely to make poetry your own and this style is great for you, I believe.

Posted: Jul 14, 2008

Author Comment:

Buttercup thank you! I like what Matthew said - poetry is an art form. I think sometimes we forget that in our bid to express emotion only. A good mix is wonderful.

I'm glad to see your experimentation. I especially like the arrangement of "winds". I can almost hear the snap of a flag wafting to and fro. The torch is passed, dear lady. Run with it. :)

Posted: Jul 15, 2008

Author Comment:

I expect Tarot I need to walk before I can run, but I like fast walking. Thanks again for all your inspirational advice. (any new Tarot works on the horizon?)

No new work planned in the near future. Life is interfering at the moment. A family member had a heart attack and I'm managing their business while the recover. Once my family member stabilizes, I have a transcontinental move to arrange. Hence, why it took me two weeks before I was able to view this grand work. Rest assured I will pop in from time to time. Take care.

Posted: Jul 16, 2008

Author Comment:

All the best Tarot with your family member and move. Life throws up periods when "extra-cirricular" activities are not on the agenda but I do hope when things settle down for the better that you share some more of yourself on booksie.
Take care.

And so I've returned to this poem of yours.
Almost like you are trying to reveal an inner struggle to freedom. Perhaps that worm you left on my page the other day. eh?

The confidence to do, just this, is what builds your personality. Ha, like I could ever tell a woman of your stature anything! ha ha...there is still a bit of control in this one though... which is exactly who you are!

Love it.

Posted: Jul 27, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks for re-read - reminds me that Tarot put a poem on his page related to "Zen" and I know nothing - promised I would research and then comment!

Queen of Cups? I loved your experiment and found it liberating. Your words always stay with me.

Posted: Aug 20, 2008

Author Comment:

October O it was lots of fun - have a few poems on the burner but very busy and haven't posted anything new for a while. Thanks for reading.



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