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love poems don't come often from me, but here is one for my husband. View table of contents...
Submitted: Apr 1, 2008 Reads: 77 Comments: 15 Likes: 8
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What a lovely poem, as well as being well written, such fine sentiments.
Posted: Apr 1, 2008
i like it
Posted: Apr 1, 2008
A very sweet poem. My favorite line is, "Warmth, wisdom, sharing the old..." My sentiments exactly.
MA
Posted: Apr 1, 2008
What a luck husband !
Posted: Apr 2, 2008
Lovely poem Anna, captivating in a simple style.
Posted: Apr 7, 2008
:D ( Thats What I'm Goin To Say Lol )
( Oh And This )
x
Posted: Apr 14, 2008
I wish I had a hubby like this.....
I liked it Anna...
honest feelings....At the end of the day,emotions win and not words....or rhymes....emotions and truth.....win always..u were right ....
Posted: Apr 14, 2008
so quixotically put.. ! Loved it.. ! :)
Posted: Apr 15, 2008
very lovely poem, especially the last stanza..i do hope one day to say the same (tho about a woman) in stead of my poetry about loss!!
Posted: Apr 15, 2008
Lolz Yeah It Was Complimentary
x
Posted: Apr 17, 2008
The emotion in this poem is soft to the eyes, the narrative is a fine melody. Love the effort and flow of this poem. Write on.
Posted: Apr 24, 2008
:) i really like this one im a sucker for gushy love stuff :) however in your short sweet poem you have managed to tell a tale of young love groing into an older more mature love and one that is sure to stand the test of time :) you and your husband are both lucky to have each other im so happy to see that you nor your husband neither one takes the love the other gives for granted as too many people these days seem to find love expendible
Posted: Jun 5, 2008
Wow, that was good. :)
Posted: Sep 5, 2008
Hello Anna, I loved it! Very well said and written as well. From the beginning 'til the end, it made me think of a lifetime of love with that "Special One".
I share most of the poems I read with my fiancee and I know that she will love this one as well. I really liked the last line, "It has always been, will always be you". Thanks for the smile and the warm heart-felt feeling inside!
Posted: Sep 29, 2008
Hello Again Anna, You and your husband are really lucky to have each other! I too, am glad and very happy to know that there are others that believe in a monogamous relationship.
Wow! Congratulations to your in-laws! 65 years is a long time and a lifetime achievement.
Posted: Sep 29, 2008
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