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Longing, Loving, Needing

Poetry By: AnonymouslyRythmical

A poem written with things on my mind, needing some criticism.

Submitted:Dec 13, 2013    Reads: 15    Comments: 1    Likes: 2   

I want to hold your hands till the end of time,
Feel your emotions melting in with mine.
Surround your heart with a lock and a key,
I pray you keep it safe with only me.
I want to feel the chills on your body when I,
Touch your lips softly against mine and die,
Every time you look me in the eyes.
I want to walk with you in complete silence,
So i can walk properly
Because hearing your words makes me lose my balance,
In a good way of course as only you can do to me.
I'll hold your secrets if you take my dysfunctional love.
I'll promise to keep them if you don't mind my random thoughts of wanting your gracefully strong hugs.
I'll tell you how precious you are,
In exchange for helping me get over my emotional scars.
I'll help you when the night is dark and cold if i may,
You can help me with the right words to say,
So i can finally help myself to having it my way.
Call me selfish but I want to be,
the only one who sees the holes in the wall you've built.
You can trust me
with that because i have a dark side, a bittersweet frown, an angry pit of guilt.
But what i'm asking is that you treat my heart with respect,
For i couldn't live a moment without me being the one you wrecked
Because last time I checked
The affect that it had
Made me feel like i have to perfect
The very core of us
Which is why i overprotect,
Out of fear of losing the only thing that makes me happy.
Though you make me sappy, and a bit snappy,
Sometimes with your cute words that always end up being right..
Or am I just always wrong?
I don't know, but the very thought of you makes want to be strong.
To sum things up its been quite simple all along.
Basically for as long as i've been longing you've held my heart and with you alone I belong.


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