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Death How Thou Art Painful

Poem By: Archangel
Poetry


Losing people you love HURTS!!!!! BUT FINDing a new one can help you get over it. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 14, 2008    Reads: 24    Comments: 2    Likes: 2   


Death How Thou Art Painful

My heart stands still
Your image sown
in my temple
no core for my own
Your heart beat stands
at slowing pace
Mine starts to race
Clammy are my hands
Life goes on around me
But yet I care for you
Even though your gone by now
My heart forever true
Death has infested your body
Within you are limp
The grasp I once held
Upon your Heart
is now gone as it is no more
And as you fly
across the celestial skies
The heart inside me
breaks, cries, and dies
Life without you
seems almost like confinement
without your heart next to mine
Baby I cant and wont
However over the next year
The dark goes away
And then I decide to stand out
in my own way
I meet a new friend
different from the rest
When it comes to giving love
she is the best
Then my heart mends
and scars contract
once wide open
now only a crack
With my new friend
I start to have fun
more than the rest
cause from her heart
love comes the best
Yes I am different
but instead of hate
Learn like my lover
and put love on the plate
Forever I will remember you
Even while I’m with her
Cause the place where you died and broke my heart
will ever remain a scar


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Comments:

this is really sweet...
finding a new one does help
but it will never be the same..
...
=D

get piece!!of work

Posted: Jun 16, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks I have felt this when my father died. Althoguh when I wrote this it was about lover's it could be determined that it was about a parent,relative,friend,etc.

Ooooo! I LOVED this!

Posted: Jun 26, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks I write alot of stories so keep checking my profile.



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