Love at a distance. View table of contents...

Submitted: Jun 14, 2008    Reads: 24    Comments: 1    Likes: 1   

To See You There

 

To see you there

Upon the shore

Of my minds great dreaming

 

To feel you near

Close to me

Longing to be seeing

 

To think of you

On days most sad

And contemplate my new rainbow

 

Your beauty surpassing

That of Venus

Goddess of love hath smite me

 

For you heart

my love and devotion

Leads nowhere

But to this dream beside the ocean

 

The ocean of my mind

Inside this feeling I must bear

I slowly wither

Just by seeing you stand over there

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vanesaec

aww cute. i liked it lots (:
keep it up

Posted: Jun 17, 2008

Author Comment:

Yea I worked really hard on it. I'm trying to get TIPS!!! on how to get better.

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