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Submitted: Aug 15, 2008 Reads: 72 Comments: 3 Likes: 1
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Wow, I know what you're trying to say here. It's so sad when youlove someone, and they just use you. Beautiful poem yet again. Keep up the good work!
Posted: Aug 15, 2008
A few lines in here remind me of my rape attack..
A beautiful disgusting poem. (:
--Tally
Posted: Aug 24, 2008
Oh,so sad.Im sorry again for that.
Posted: Aug 26, 2008
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