They just used you for their gain.
They wait in the shadows to strike.

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Submitted: May 17, 2008 Reads: 63 Comments: 5 Likes: 5
They just used you for their gain.
They wait in the shadows to strike.
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powerful! your right, real monsters are the ones that gossip! great job!
Posted: May 17, 2008
I know just how this feels! I've been through situations like this one, and I have many friends that are like that. You can really turn your poems into a beautiful story, which is something else I really like about them. Keep writing! :D
Posted: May 17, 2008
This is so true. I know exactly what your talking about. Great piece of writing^.^
Posted: May 17, 2008
this is really deep and it hits my heart. keep up the good work:]
Posted: May 18, 2008
I love the title; it attracts you to the poem.
So much emotion that everyone feels but is too scared to make public; this poem took courage.
Very down-to-earth and humane; yet again, beautiful.
--Tally :]
Posted: May 18, 2008
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