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Scarred, Forever

Poem By: ashen
Poetry


He scarred her, yet she is trying to forgive him, even though she is hurt. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 3, 2008    Reads: 65    Comments: 5    Likes: 2   


Forever ended today,

Never to come past her wall of safety again,

Never to see the light.

You broke her on the inside,

And scarred her on the outside.

Will she ever trust again?

What have you done?

Ruined the life she had,

Happiness has left her forever.

It started with a bruise,

And a scratch here and there,

But then you torn her to pieces,

And left her in shambles,

Inside and out.

Her heart is broken,

And her eyes are swollen from crying.

You hit her in the heart with a fatal blow.

Will she ever recover?

Will she ever be repaired?

She thought you loved her,

Because she loved you,

With her now useless heart.

Her heart beat just for you,

But you just beat her.

And pushed her away.

You said it was an accident,

You said you didn’t mean for it to hurt,

But those are lies,

Like all the other ones you told her.

She lived for you,

But you used her.

You told her lies.

And what started out small

Became something more.

Something dark,

And something that brought pain.

You caused hurt and sadness,

Insanity and destruction.

She is scarred,

And you don’t care.

She scared to face what she is inside,

And afraid to become the person she was.

You destroyed her,

And left her for dead.

Permanently,

By your carelessness,

And hate.

How could you?

She falling apart,

Slowly,

Because you were what kept her together,

And now you’re gone,

And you gave her a painful memory,

To keep reminding her,

So it never fades away,

And it's making her numb.

Yet she is still trying to forgive you,

After all you have done to her,

The hitting and the abusive words.

You feel no shame,

You have no regrets,

And you had no mercy.

And you let her blame herself,

Even though she already feels hopeless enough.

She is still loving you with the pieces of her crushed heart.

Though all this sadness,

And this black out,

She is trying to forgive you,

Even though she is scarred,

Forever,

And broken,

And lost,

And alone.


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Comments:

Wow, I really, really liked this poem. One of my favorites for sure. I've fel tlike this before. Great job. ^^

Posted: Jun 3, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much =]

Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. *claps*

Posted: Jun 5, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much! :D Glad you liked it =]

I really like the change from your normal first-person to third person. Good job.
Amazing ending as well.

-Tally

Posted: Jun 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks so much Tally! :D

hi! ashen. if she can forgive him, although scarred, she is great. well-written. lol. ;-)

Posted: Jun 9, 2008

Author Comment:

Haha, thanks bubbly :D

Anzell
(not registered user)

are you writing from own experience...it is amazingly to the core..

Posted: Jun 25, 2008

Author Comment:

Yeah, most of my poems are based off my feelings, or something I've gone through. Thanks, I'm glad you liked it :D



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