
Random First Lines: '' Heart break'' I see you there, walking by me like you don't even see me, or You don't want to. I ask my self... : Poetry » Read
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Submitted: Jun 24, 2008 Reads: 47 Comments: 3 Likes: 1
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Oh, wow, this poem is very strong. It feels like you are speaking to someone frm the heart, trying to convinse them to trust again. Very nice poem. =]
Posted: Jun 24, 2008
I hated myself when I was vulnerable.
A great topic to write on.
The vibe from this poem is beautiful and very inspiring.
You make people smile.
--Tally
Posted: Jul 3, 2008
Oh my goodness-I feel like such a jackass right now-but it's okay=Your words above speak to me and everything u said is like a wake up call/slap in the face with cold water, to me-I have been spending too much time alone and I will admit that I am vulnerable, but I am stubborn-anyways, you should be commended for this letter/poem cuz it's all true and we should all listen-it's just so hard to trust people, you know? when u have been hurt way too many times that u can't even count them, and then when we ourselves hurt others...still I enjoyed reading this-it is motivational xXx*Meg*xXx
Posted: Aug 1, 2008
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