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Tell Me What You Think...

Poem By: Atalus
Poetry


A poem inspired by posters I saw around which were blank save for 'Tell me what you think' handwritten (in cursive) on the top in black marker. I never got to write this on one - they were all taken down fairly fast. Please enjoy! View table of contents...

 

Submitted: May 9, 2008    Reads: 35    Comments: 4    Likes: 1   


Tell Me What You Think...

"About the world?"

                            Yes...

"There is love...

                        and conflict...

                                            and maturity followed by

                                                           an infantile nature."

                             Keep going...

"There is apathy...

                            and enthusiam....

                                                       and a suspect society with

                                                                   a peace-obsession."

                             And...

"There is a way for us to change...

                 and for us to stay the same...

       And we refuse them both in the interest of staying put,

                        when we should refuse them for

                                                                        the purpose of

                                                                                            merely

                    S T A N D I N G          S T I L L."


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Comments:

I liked it! good job. so true. =D

Posted: May 9, 2008

you received my I Liked It Vote on this. cool style that is accented with some creative word play. This was smooth and made its point.

Posted: May 10, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you, I'm glad the message got through. ^^

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Posted: May 11, 2008

Author Comment:

:D

this ROL!!!!!!!(ROCKS OUT LOUD) KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!

Posted: May 12, 2008

Author Comment:

ROFL, thank you!



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