
Random First Lines: '' Heart break'' I see you there, walking by me like you don't even see me, or You don't want to. I ask my self... : Poetry » Read
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Submitted: Jun 17, 2008 Reads: 27 Comments: 2 Likes: 1
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hi! a. u've made a point here. people should reach out to others instead of sitting in their onesome castles. but how many'll realise that. that's a question. everyone wants to be looked up to and sought but not many want to look around or seek.
a thoughtful poem. lol. ;-)
Posted: Jul 1, 2008
that is really good, very well writen i like the 'you cry song of lonliness' line. its great!
Posted: Jul 6, 2008
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