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Should I help you?

Poem By: Awesomeblossom
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Submitted: Jun 17, 2008    Reads: 27    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   


Now tell me, how can I help you.
You sit in the corner all by your self crying, wanting to be with someone.
You stand at the end of a line, waiting for some one to talk to you.
So tell me, how can I help you?
There you are again in the middle of the concert with thousands of people surrounding you, but no one is with you.
There you are again standing next to the person you have a crush on, in the music section of the book store, yet you do not talk to me.
You dare not look too quick
You dare not speak too fast
So really now tell me, why should I help you?
I look in your direction with no eye contact, watching you as you cry a song of loneliness.
I stood in the middle of the line so that you could see me.
I was only a few feet away from you at the concert. when I yelled your name; you turned into my direction and ignored me.
Tell me why I should help you solve your lonely problem!
You did nothing for yourself, even when I was a foot away at the bookstore sharing the same musical taste.
Now indeed I will help you!
Please understand that you just can not sit waiting for someone to come to you.
Do yourself a favor and go out and find what you want.


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Comments:

hi! a. u've made a point here. people should reach out to others instead of sitting in their onesome castles. but how many'll realise that. that's a question. everyone wants to be looked up to and sought but not many want to look around or seek.

a thoughtful poem. lol. ;-)

Posted: Jul 1, 2008

that is really good, very well writen i like the 'you cry song of lonliness' line. its great!

Posted: Jul 6, 2008



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