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"HATRED AND REGRET"

Poem By: Azmat Shah
Poetry


This is my take on war and the only things it leaves behind. Please excuse the irregularities in the symmetry but this one came from the heart and i just couldnt change it. I have not even edited this one, and i think i will leave it as it is, its very roughness typifies in my opinion the pointlessness of war. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Aug 28, 2008    Reads: 74    Comments: 8    Likes: 4   


Like silent nights its stillness seeps,

accross the distance and waters deep,

one hears but naught except the breeze,

it flows unfulfilled yet unrestrained,

Longing for times past it howls and weeps.

But what has left does not return,

like a solemn book the pages turn,

tick, tick, tick the clock of time goes,

grains of sand through trembling fingers flow.

One by one the moments pass,

one tries to hold what can not last,

while the raging tempestous winds of change,

rake up a storm, through silent hopes charred and frayed.

And now at last the storm has ebbed,

All hopes have gone and dreams are dead,

one stands alone atop the jagged edge,

for one has only two things left,

one is hatred the other regret.


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Azmat,

You might find "bluebear86's" piece "Poison Planet" interesting. I found it heartening that one so young could question.

Susan

Posted: Aug 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanx for the tip, i will check it out as soon as possible.

I love this piece. It speaks volumes...and also puts a lot of my thoights into words. Great way of expression.

Posted: Aug 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanx babe i am so happy you liked this:)

Maybe foolishmess as a spice to the hate & regret

Posted: Aug 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanx for the tip:)

So haunting... made me think of Afghanistan. Somehow, also of 'Gone with the wind'.

All of us are victims of war, at some level or the other. Somewhere, the nations fight, elsewhere it is a civil war; there are mini wars at work, with people trying to backstab eachother; wars within families, ego clashes, love, envy, possessiveness.... I wonder what the solution is. The best policy would be to live and let live, but it can be implemented only if it is unanimously done so - otherwise the world would be divided between the suppressors and the suppressed. Right and wrong are such subjective terms most of the time, and we still fight over it. Instead, why can't people leave the others alone to pursue their personal paths? What can we do? Can anything be done at all?

You've written about a deep and disturbing topic, and as usual, done well. Good to have you back, my friend.

Posted: Aug 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Great to be back hun. You know i dont really think we can do much about this particular problem. Yes war is bad yes it is the single most debilitating occurence on earth but than it is also sadly ingrained in human nature.

Hi Azmat... Truly touching piece. And a subject that touches all of us on a daily basis. You've got a gift and I'm honoured to read your poetry. Great poem. Sad but good.
for one has only two things left,

one is hatred the other regret.
Fav lines in the poem. Regret always comes to late.... War is the one thing that i can't condole, ever.... innocent lives are lost, countries destroyed. Hopes demolished. Dreams crushed. Families torn apart.
You've captured this beautifully.

Posted: Sep 15, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanx for ur great comment babe. U know i am delighted you caught onto the use of regret agter hatred, i did that intentionally to show that hatred always precedes regret when it comes to war, but by the time people realize that it is always too late. Because then that is when remorse, bitterness, hopelessness and finally vengeance take hold, and they feed upon themselves to ignite the very cycle of hatred and regret once more. Unfortunately war is like a never ending vicious cycle, that drags everyone and everything down with it.

Hello Azmat...Your title itself is so correct...hatred can only generate regret..you are a philosopher poet..thanks for sharing your fine work.
Rahbar.

Posted: Sep 24, 2008

Author Comment:

thanx for reading and commenting, i really appreciate it:)

i am also in the same state of mind as u are esp since both India and Pakistan are trying to be the BEST and GOD only knows when this will stop...civilians r fleeing the country since it is no more safe for kids...
i am frustrated buddy...where is a place on earth where there is no war, no hatred, no regret, no terrorism...

peace, love, brotherhood etc are words used by poets and writers only...

i hate this state ...I am so worried about my kid and all the kids out there who are no more safe...when i compare my childhood with kriish's, i feel so sad and so worried and depressed....

Can we do something ?? Please , can someone help me carve a path towards a safe for kids to grow...my life is almost complete...what about the next generation? Shall we just leave things on to GOD...??

AZMAT, ur poem stirred my soul ...THANKS

Posted: Oct 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Hello,
pratibha as always i am truly humbled by your response. I really dont have the answers to your questions babe i am afraid no one does. You see according to me there is just so much desperation and ignorence in this world right now, in both the rich and poor, that i dont think that anyone can really except someone who is different from them in an openhearted way.
There is always an air of distrust. Unfortunately the menace of terrorism and war is rampant in our part of the world but our people refuse to see it for what it truly is. Terrorism does not have a caste, creed or religion, it does not have an agenda or an aim all it strives for is total destruction and anarchy. I really think that this is like a disease, it is the human equivalent of rabies. The perpetrators of terrorism are sadly completely insane, they sacrifice both their lives(The one on earth and the afterlife) for an ideology that in its very base is completely shallow and an ideal that is completely hollow.

Love anger

Posted: Oct 12, 2008



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