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This is my take on Love. A short poem which emphasizes the dual nature of this very mercurial emotion. View table of contents...
Submitted: May 19, 2008 Reads: 39 Comments: 5 Likes: 2
The great poets say that love is pure,
It is salvation, it is a cure,
From angels wings it is concieved,
From destitution it is reprieve.
It is like two roads with a common start,
But the routes they follow are far apart,
One leads to heaven the other hell,
where i will end up i canot tell.
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this is a beauty. i read it at one go 'coz it has easy flow. the comparison of love with 2 roads is unusual. but it leads to a good conclusion. ;-)
Posted: May 19, 2008
Ouch.
Drastic analogy!
if I go to heaven, you'll go to hell.
eeek!
*teasing
Posted: May 21, 2008
Wow, nice to see some good old-fashioned poetry here! You have managed to convey a lot in just a few lines. I like the sudden, dramatic twist in the tone of the poem in the second stanza. I think you need to add a 'to' between 'other' and 'hell' - you know - 'one leads to heaven, the other to hell'. Good job. Will be reading more of your works soon.
Posted: May 27, 2008
Poor guy, you can know where you will end up. Good poem. It causes one to think of eternity, but you can know. I would love to show you.
Posted: Jun 10, 2008
I can show you through the scriptures how you can go to heaven, Azmat.
Posted: Jun 11, 2008
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