Dreaming Shackled Dreams

Dreaming Shackled Dreams

Shackled to a world of dreams
My body screams of destiny
My heart finds the desires
My mind finds the directions
I drive into the dawn
This is my day
How can I grab my dream
I give all my strength till my death
These strings are not deceiving
The outcome has still not been deemed

Why can’t this life I have become more than a dream

Deemed are, my rights to question why
Deceiving images, do not perceive the outcome
Death will hold me with love, for all that I give
Dreams becoming reality, only if I knew how
Day, holding my heart to this
Dawn, of a selfish deed, will lead to a revolution, I drive
Directions given, that end with dead ends, lies all that fill my mind
Desire, my sorrow washed away, gloriously shining now my heart
Destiny, mans lost quests of soul greatness, causes a relapse of my body
Dreams, when achieved free you of, suffocating vices, shatter the Shackles

Dream of Destiny
Desire Direction
Dawn of this Day
Dream without Death
Deceiving manipulates the Deemed
Dream.

Comments:

LaughingRain

Hm, cool poem. It seems like there are a few minor typos but I really like the concept. :)

Posted: Jul 10, 2008

Zia Jaycee

wow great poem B Leaf i love the alliteration great stuff and keep writing poetry :) -zia

Posted: Jul 26, 2008

bubbly

hi! bleaf. with all the "d" words in the poem, u should be rightly called "d"leaf. jokes apart, our dreams, desires and destiny r v all about. that is what makes us. it's refreshing to read ur point of view. lol. ;-)

Posted: Jul 28, 2008

Author Comment:

Hehe :) thanks. I used an interesting format for this just kinda random idea I had. Did the d words at the end I believe it is then once I was at the middle I used a connector then reversed the order and placement abcdef at the end g connector abcdef word at the the start except it is not a rhyme but rather the same word. I appreciate your comments as always and am glad that it is refreshing I enjoy your writing it makes me laugh and love. Take care thanks :)

Pratibha

u sure know how to create magic buddy

Posted: Jul 30, 2008

Kred35

Wow, BLeaf.....what a poem! THis is GREAT, EXCELLENT, and just down right BEAUTIFUL!! Great form, well written, absolutely awesome. This was my favorite part:
Deemed are, my rights to question why
Deceiving images, do not perceive the outcome
Death will hold me with love, for all that I give
Dreams becoming reality, only if I knew how
Day, holding my heart to this Dawn, of a selfish deed, will lead to a revolution, I drive Directions given, that end with dead ends, lies all that fill my mind
Desire, my sorrow washed away, gloriously shining now my heart Destiny, mans lost quests of soul greatness, causes a relapse of my body Dreams, when achieved free you of, suffocating vices, shatter the Shackles

wow!..... ~Karla~

Posted: Aug 4, 2008

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Poem By: B Leaf
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