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Grass Skies Elves

Poem By: B Leaf
Poetry


I wrote this at fourteen not incredible but I wrote it so why not put it up here. View table of contents...

 

Submitted: Jun 14, 2008    Reads: 21    Comments: 2    Likes: 1   


Grass Skies Elves

I sit in the valley

With a blue sky

Here to listen to the sound

Of elves whispering in my ear

I look at the tall grass

I have a fear

That I'll be alone

With nothing to fear.


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Comments:

i do think loneliness is our greatest strength....Loneliness never betrays us and gives so much in return.

Posted: Jul 30, 2008

Short, nice, good for a 14 y/o... i think you write much better now though!

xox jennifer xox

Posted: Aug 11, 2008



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