Grass Skies Elves
I sit in the valley
With a blue sky
Here to listen to the sound
Of elves whispering in my ear
I look at the tall grass
I have a fear
That I'll be alone
With nothing to fear.

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Submitted: Jun 14, 2008 Reads: 21 Comments: 2 Likes: 1
Grass Skies Elves
I sit in the valley
With a blue sky
Here to listen to the sound
Of elves whispering in my ear
I look at the tall grass
I have a fear
That I'll be alone
With nothing to fear.
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i do think loneliness is our greatest strength....Loneliness never betrays us and gives so much in return.
Posted: Jul 30, 2008
Short, nice, good for a 14 y/o... i think you write much better now though!
xox jennifer xox
Posted: Aug 11, 2008
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