Inside my own Head

Inside my own Head

Every now and then

I think

I think about the time

I've spent not being myself

Always here and now

I'm living like I'm dieing

Doing my best to remember

Every second of it

Doing the best I can

Being the best I am

If tommarow

Is the last day

I'm breathing

Then I'm fine with that

If I'm going down for the count

I'll be making the best of it

Living life

Like every second

Is my last

Let me send this message out

With a carrier pigeon

Just spread it

Peace and Love

To every single person

Every person anywhere

Why Steal

Why Hate

Why kill each other

Why do we fight and kill each other

Why do we fight and die

Let's unite

Strive for that better world

A world of

Peace and Love

Everyone is dieing at different paces

So why do we insist

On dividing

Races

Skin is just another type of clothing

We are all the same

Underneath it all

Let's unite

Be equal and make this world

A place of

Peace and Love

Freedom

Happiness

Olive Branches

White Doves

Strength without

Guns

Humanity

United as

One

Comments:

bubbly

hi! bleaf. what a stark reality u've brought forth - dove and guns. war mongers'll become extinct if more people'll follow what u write. peace is the crying need of our times. a wonderful read. ;-)

Posted: Jun 16, 2008

Author Comment:

Thanks for you comment bubbly means a lot :)(insert punctuation here) My reality may be slightly harsh or maybe even a little extreme but I like that aspect. The way I read it seemed like you were fond of it too. The reason I choose to put it this way I guess is because that is the way I really see the world. When I was writing I was thinking about Noah's arc in all honesty. That is why the doves ended up weaving their way in. This also made sense since they stand for peace. That is one breed of life I wish would become extinct. Funny how this short little comment from you can mean so much to me. I do appreciate that you think we could possibly not have war if people read what I wrote. Thanks again for everything

Lacey Cummings

Very nice. I love the message and agree with you. Plus, I think its inciteful of you to spend each day like its your last. It takes some practise doing that I think.

Posted: Jun 17, 2008

Author Comment:

I'm still trying to perfect that living each day to the fullest thing. Very tough for me honestly my mind set really seems to tend to drift towards death. Thanks for your comment much appreciated.

Zia Jaycee

I totally agree on you in this poem...(well i always agree w/ u but watever) so there are so many times where i have not been myself and I wish I could have that time back! My favorite line is "Skin is just another type of clothing"- awesome use of words and your poetry is so deep and meaningful...you write completely from your heart...i try to :) great job and keep writing i love to read ur stuff :)-zia

Posted: Jul 7, 2008

Author Comment:

Thank you I love all of the writing that I have read from you so far as well. I am so glad that you find the deepness in my writing I appreciate it. Your writing is deep don't think otherwise. I actualy went outside into the silent sounds of nature and started to paint. I would have painted anyways but it would have been in front of the tv watching Oprah. LOL. I would like to thank you for this. Take care and you keep writing as well.

viper

Good Job I Liked It. It Mkaes Alot Of Sense And I Agree. I Wish You'd Check My Poems Out And Let Me Know What You Think.I'm New On Here And Need All The Opinions I Can Get.

Posted: Jul 10, 2008

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