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The latest driftings of my imagination. Actually, this is a sort of prayer...a prayer come true. View table of contents...
Submitted: Jun 5, 2007 Reads: 75 Comments: 5 Likes: 1
Let it all fall away
Into the cold air,
The rushing wind
Lift me higher today
Up towards the blue sky,
The cotton clouds
Release all my burdens
Let them tumble
At the foot of the cross
Steal my pain and sorrow
Melt them into rain,
Refreshing and cool to my soul
Let it all fall away
As I bow down,
Humbled on my knees
Take me to the sunset
Show me the color of love
And let it all fall away
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As beautiful a prayer as I have ever seen, or borrowed.
Posted: Jun 6, 2007
A simple poem containing a deep theme.Good.
Posted: Jun 6, 2007
Beautiful Simplicity:
Another excellent and soulful poem. Beautiful.
Interesting and unusual. Though not for you.
Happy trails,
Ed Bradley.
Posted: Jun 6, 2007
Great imagery...well structured and flowed quite nicely:)
Posted: Jun 7, 2007
O_o WOW! well done, such simplicity, yet so deep!
Posted: Apr 24, 2008
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